It took me a while to get round to reading this story but it was worth the delay. I lost myself completely in Cynthia's dilemma. Perfect! I do hope you decide to continue it

Very very nice story, I have just now found it. I do hope for a sequel. A weight reduction scheme may be put in action with bimbo's daily weight stated and her actual weight and the punishments for not reaching the required weight loss. The punishments may be caning on the back of her thighs. Light coloured stockings will reveal the welts.
Really there are so many possibilities with this story, please write some more chapters.

Sincerely yours

Grey Master

Congrats to Monica and Todd! thanks for shnirag Alex! What a great day it was, you captured some beautiful images! fantastic work! so, they will have their honeymoon in Europe, I'm also jealous!:) I wish them a beautiful time there!

Quit already, leave the city find a job u can hold and dress with a little dignity, 8.50 an hr aint worth it..

Hi Karen Anne,

I have read this story several times, and every time I enjoyed it. I fantasy sometimes about a sequel in which our Bimbo wil be put in little girls clothing and be fed with baby jar by her co-workers.

maid_annelies

this was an excellent story well written and explained my only comment is that theire should be more of this one i for one would like to find out about the punnishments and more of the demerit system and other things that could go with this story please write more of this one it was brilliant thankyou

My name might indicate just how high in esteem I hold Cynetta Cynthia Cynclaire, but she does need a talking to.  I have wanted to send this in for the longest time, and should no doubt be punished for not doing so, but hopefully better late than never. Hope this space expands.
Dear, Dear Cynetta Cynthia,   Of course you don't date! How stupid do you think your readers are? How can you date when you are locked away in your Mistress's Dungeon? ou may think of it as your writing quarters, but it is your Mistress's Dungeon. And for ten years. Good.
Of course you can't sell a novel. You wouldn't see one if it was right under your eyes. AND IT IS! You are such a dolt. An airhead. Yes, a Bimbo.
You still don't get it, do you?You say you couldn't hold a job for more than a week? Cynetta, you must give us more credit than that. Do you really think that after one week on the job we would believe Monica would take you home and make you her maid-slave? Yeah, right.
Let me spell this out for you: the 37 pages of Cynetta's Job is chapter 1 of a great novel - YOUR GREAT NOVEL.  My gosh I just thought of something I didn't think of before! Cynetta, you WANTED that ten year sentence!!! And you are so very lucky you have a Mistress that gave it to you!!!  (If this doesn't make sense to any readers, go read all of Cynetta's works and come back.)
Well let me make a suggestion to your Mistress.  She should force you to wear some really ugly outfits until you get started on ffinishing Cynetta's Job. I wouldn't be so mean as to keep you in ugly clothes if you make a good faith effort to work on Cynetta's Job.
And I can tell you meant for it to be a novel. There is so much fore shadowing in Chapter 1.  I'm going to give you some suggestions that seem to come directly from your writing as opposed to being from my particular passions.  So as I reread for the umpteenth time...
Monica just tells her the time to start  - great. The dress code could be elaborated/expanded as time goes on - like the next week.  At least give her three weeks before she has to go to six inch heels. Monica is mind reading? Cynetta, come on, you're like an open book.
If Monica can think up a bunch more - orders - let us in on them, please.   And Monica is very impressive - mind absorbing - capable of draining any resistance. Certainly she is capable of coming up with enough orders to keep Cynetta on edge and off balance for a year in the office. Maybe more.
Sorry, sorry, she does have a month to get ready for six heels. Monica is so kind and yes, loving, I can tell. But let us here about the whole month, please.  (you know I mean year, two years - ok life time - I love your characters).
Wish I knew more about hair than just how to put on four different wigs. But yes, never let her cut it on her own. Do you really ever take that long to do your nails? Lucky.
The wardrobe deal is a fantastic idea. I'd want to get so much that I'd have to work for two years before the debt would be canceled. (In fact when the wife and kids went back east for the holidays, I did splurge and got some great outfits - and I had to take the skirts back and get size 10s - so I've been dressing every day.)
And the corset!!!! And being tightened until you start obeying orders - yesss!! And no complaints. (I once made the mistake of offering too many suggestions to a certain Countess from Las Vegas years ago. I've always wondered what would have happened if I had kept my mouth shut.)  So back to the corset shop...when you do eventually become Monica's maid - as you surely shall be - you are in for much more severe corset training.  You have so many experiences to endure in the office and with the contract extension Monica will surely "force" you to accept...but how could Monica wait that long to get you into maid service??? - you better come up with a good answer - or else. (But I am getting ahead.)
Did it really come as a shock when the receptionist job had not been discussed? Humbling isn't it? Ummmm.
I like the heart too. Anklet bracelets must be simply enthralling. And I can just tell that Cynetta is going to sometime willfully voice some complaints. At first without knowing full well the results...and then also when she knows  full well what the results will be. And, Cynetta, you know it too.
Being told to keep her hands behind her back - better even than handcuffs! The mental submission! The joy of that submission. Cynetta, you are good. Yes, Cynetta will no doubt try really, really hard to please, even while voicing a complaint or doing something else that will give Monica an excuse she really won't need. Course, Monica will know exactly what is going on in Cynetta's mind.
And Monica will come up with an embarrassing order out of the blue, I bet.
Cynetta, you would never have chickened out...but keep telling yourself that. Yes, I would have been dreadfully embarrassed - no thoroughly humiliated - but sometimes that is the lot to which we fall.
Pink sweater and black leather mini = lovely. Good idea to save the submitting to six inch heels till later.  Those "suggestions" about how you might best spend your time could/should/will fill at least a couple chapters.
I hope you didn't have to run out for false eyelashes at 4 in the morning. But I am sure there will be a number of embarrassing shopping trips.
Somewhere, sometime, please let us read the full Employment Agreement. Maybe allude to it a few more times as you refer to its strictures before you disclose it completely.
Giving up the car and apartment keys does really leave one exposed. And then to hear that loud click.  And then to get your keys back. I can just see Cynetta looking at her keys and then looking at the little glass door.
A prominent attachment or variety there of in the center of the pink stool would remove the slippery "problem." I'm sure the stool can be raised and lowered from Monica's office. You're not going to have to stay in those (diapers)...you know...all the time? There must be some other solution.   Oh, did I just make a pun. You poor dear.
My mind must not be in gear either - I've read this four times before and I'm sure I remember - are you not checking your seams enough or what? And punished?  Yes, curtseys.
Detailed Demerit System - yes we need to learn more about this. Working off demerits by accepting punishments. How many chapters do you think you should write about that? ...yes, at least that many.

Secrecy/non-disclosure agreement - what it that all about?  And Cynetta Cynthia, you say the duration is 183 days and renewable in three 166 day increments  - or is that meant to be 366 day increments of unspecified number.  I'd be swooning, mt dear.  Thirty day trial and then the debt for the shopping trip would be erased.  You should have kept shopping. Maybe next time you will. Yes, dear, of course there will be a next time. Yes, check those seams.
Mai Ling says Monica doesn't play it with the rest of us. Cynetta, if you believe that, you are underestimating Mai Ling.  I can sense there is a lot going on in this office. You were hired as one of HER NEW toys. Cynetta, get a clue. (oh, Cynetta you really know all the clues - and just keep dropping these hints -uuuhhhrrr.) Suzie designed the office, not Monica? There's got to be more to the office - surprises to last months. Mai Ling says that Monica will make SOME of your dreams (which ones - which ones not) come true - just play by her rules. Her rules would make me happy. You know you'll work off some of those demerits someday being locked in the windowless hall closet.
You have to bring out Cheryl's teasing sense of humor. Suzie has a Master's in engineering or architecture. (Now don't get me wrong  - I am very pro-women, but I'm a geologist and know there were very few females in my classes. Probably even fewer in engineering - even today.) I'm beginning to wonder about Suzie. Suzie doesn't kid much - why? Because she is busy trying to be Suzie???!! And Cindy has a deep, practical side like Suzie. Just how much like Suzie is Cindy???  
Will you take Suzie's advice, Cynetta, or will you find out the hard way just how miserable Monica can make you feel? And why does Suzie know this? Could SHE be speaking from experience??? And I do like the way Suzie cares for you. And you couldn't admit that it was Suzie that helped you figure it out to ask for more diapers. Doesn't surprise me. Suzie was right to tighten the corset laces even a little tighter, wasn't she?
Monica was easy that first day? She'll start being tougher. Cynetta,your story better live up to that - in the weeks and months ahead. You need to include lots of punishments and admit  what you did wrong to deserve them. For one thing, Cynetta, you should have already signed your agreement and just taken it out of your purse and handed it to Monica. Didn't you imagine what a good impression that would have made on Monica about how hard you would try to please her? You should have.
Don't tell Monica but her math was a little off - your day is    ONLY nine hours and forty five minutes. Or was that your mistake??? Do you get punished for errors in your stories? You should, you know. (I wonder if you get to primp in your writer's quarters like you do in your story?)
I'm impressed that you realized that you shouldn't get into a debate with Monica about being a bimbo. I can empathize with you standing there after Monica says, "Nothing to say?" I can hear her asking softly, "Cynetta?"
Cynetta, we'd like more details on Monica's rules also. I suppose we have to wait until you know them yourself. At least you know not to ask Monica to ease up on you. Of course it doesn't take a rocket scientist to figure that one out. But I liked your response of not knowing the proper response.
By the way, what stakes would you have proposed if you had been able to get Monica bet on the nail polish? Anyway, I can just picture you as you raise your pretty eyes to look at Monica. Yes, you have LET Monica do everything. (Yes, sometime Monica will have to use some of her magic words she has to stop you from doing something.)
Cynetta Cynthia Cynclaire, you are fabulous. This next stuff!!! Say, Monica I quit and you are free to leave, contract cancelled, keep the bonus, keep the clothes, but I'll never take you back. Monica is demanding the ultimate mental and emotional submission voluntarily knowing that Cynetta really knows in her heart that she has no choice other than to submit. Being banished, being exiled by a mistress can be  devasting, but to ask for it would have to be impossible. And Monica is just going to give you one more chance to say I quit, and then you are hers for 183 work days (so that does include 36 Saturdays and 36 Sundays) till you can say it again. AND CYNETTA CYNTHIA YOUR STORY DOES NOT EVEN GET TO THAT ONE CHANCE - SHAME.

Monica is letting the other girls loose on you, and you aren't going to tell us about it. All the interactions, relationships and you won't share them. Open your heart and open your mind and share the rest of Cynetta's story. Please!
Disobey and you will be punished, Monica said. Don't think you won't be. Physically and psychologically. At least five or six more chapters there.
Enter Cindy. If she is checking the clock that closely, we all know she is going to be punished for being late. She has to be the most recently added to the staff. And dressed as she is, you're not going to tell me that she is all girl. Maybe more on her way than you, but...with poufed mini dress with petticoats.
Oh, Cynetta, you're a TV star. Tyra needs to instruct her in posture, carriage and curtseys. Tell us that too. I can't wait for the next meeting when the demerit system will be explained!  Now which ones will treat her as a bimbo during off hours. Some won't want to - which? Cheryl and Tyra might treat her as a bimbo. Mai Ling, Susie and certainly not Cindy won't. Blonde Cindy is probably just getting over her own airhead period. Cheryl seems like she would be a fiery redhead. Yes, you should have a greater range of hair styles - like a mass of long curly hair.   And what a delicious stocking show.
I like that not being GG is never brought up. But sometime, something has got to give. Maybe after she becomes Monica's Maid in BOOK TWO. Cynetta , you better get busy. Tyra does get the training going, doesn't she?  Cynetta, even though we all know you are intelligent, I don't think you would remember all fourteen steps. Have your cry, then get busy doing your lines. I bet you got them out of order but were too embarrassed to tell us about it. How many times did you have to rewrite them? I'm surprised you didn't get the run until after you had fixed your makeup and had another good cry about the run and thus have to do your makeup yet again. Cindy carries eight extra pairs of nylons at all times.  She has to still be undergoing extensive training. Better let us know about it. And you have to tell us about your work modeling for EWric's ad. (You better print all this out and check everything off as you do your writing --do I ever envy Kelly Ann Rogers being able to colaborate with you on Jacqui -- but I don't know how you would deal with an incurable romantic Laura Anne Lynn Loretta that would have  Lots And Lots of Love develop between Monica and Cynetta.}

So is Jon Gunther going to be a character? Doesn't matter to me. I'd be a gay lesbian too.
The Bimbo's Demerit Board better be kept up to date.
So at the end of the second day, Monica says I'm going to be rough, really rough on you. You have to share that with us. You can get above being the real Bimbo you are. Monica said it. I believe it, but I want to know how you do it. And then I want to know what happens to you then. How do you end up as Monica's maid? Twenty chapters??? (Maybe we can get a couple years off your sentence???)
Suzie, the engineer, has identical stockings too. Cindy, Susie and you Cynetta all have something special in common. Don't tell me otherwise. Susie still likes beer. You better settle for your wine. Good thing you kept your corset on. I bet Susie's waist isn't over 20". Obeying Susie while not being dominated. Good to have a friend like that. I can sense that you are going to wise up and not feel so sorry for yourself, display yourself better, thinking good thoughts. When and how is the last chance to say I quit going to happen? Most of us don't obey Monica like you have been, says Susie. Duh, that means that some of them have been - like at least Cindy and Susie.

Cynetta, Susie has a good challenge for you. Play Monica's game, get good at it. Try to beat her at it. Yes, there will be some failures and punishments, but try. If you get close, or it seems like you might, she'll change the rules!!! (Thirty more chapters - and then start over as "Monica's Maid.") Than can I apply for your vacant position??? Please. Guidance for those chapters, highest heels, corseted to the tiniest waist. STUPID THINGS. Cynetta Cynthis, you need to think up at least three things, really stupid things, to do on purpose and the resulting punishments before you learn your lessons. And then you need to think up two more really stupid things you do by accident. You also know you're going to try baby food for lunch, don't you. I think it will be quite awhile before you figure out about the cameras, but you will wonder how everybody seems to know everything all the time.

So we come to Friday of the first week. So what is the revealing outfit Monica provided? What happens that night? And the rest of the weekend? And the Next week? Month? Year? CYNETTA CYNTHIA CYNCLAIRE PLEASE WRITE IT FOR ALL YOUR READERS.

CYNETTA"S JOB is obviously one of my favorite stories, but I wish it was a novel - it's so great.

Now for the next story.  No then this might become a novel.  But some of your other stories are just Chapter 1 ALSO!!!!

If I didn't love your stories, obviously I wouldn't take the time to write all this.  I hope some of the time you are allowed  - or commanded  - to write all dressed up and prettily made up - (or maid up) and perhaps even write under very restrictive conditions. I just want to encourage you to do so and thank you so much for already having written so many great works.

I do so wish we could communicate directly, but with my job situation, marriage continuing just for the kids, in Wyoming it would be hard.  But in two years the third will be off to college and Laura Anne will have a chance to really share her fantasy stories.  Maybe things (divorce) will happen before then.  Laura Anne's gentleness, kindness and caring is what has kept us together for the last 14 years, but my wife doesn't even know her name even though I dressed up as a maid for her before I even asked her to marry but...  

Any way, you have encouraged me to do some stories for Storysite that Laura has had kicking around up there for years.  Perhaps the best way for you to respond would be to include a little vignette about Cynetta's big fan offering her encouragement and thanks.  Laura Anne

Excellent, and a sequel would be great.

Also, there seem to be several stories that are occuring at the same office building.  Several of them (Janet wheeler, My Secretary (which I absolutely would love to see a sequel too, even moreso than this one), and Kristine Kynkaid) would be great with a second part/sequel

also, I loved Tiffany Manners

great well written stories

Great story!  Please do a sequal.

Shhesh - I thought this was going to be really kinky <grin>. Seems to me a whole lotta fun being had by all, highly inventive, noone gets physically hurt (okay a few welts). No "oh boy I'm a girl I gotta have sex right away" stuff either. All in all an enjoyable read.

A great fun story. And probably the best example of building a cliffhanger into a tg tale.

Exactly what does Cynetta's revealing outfit look like?

Please, please, please continue this quirky tale.

I like all your stories because they are excentric. I like this one because it is excentric and because Cynetta's love interest is female also. Because its clear you care about your characters and they to me have a life of their own which they are true to.


The setup is great and the resistance/submission works (at least it works in a Cynetta world which is how I read your stories).

Thanks and keep up the good work.

Spice and dreams -- jynjer


"We are bunny. You will be stimulated. Resistance is fun."
 --seventy of sixty-nine