7PyaG8 Im obliged for the article.

aobu8P Thank you for your article post.Really looking forward to read more.

Good to see real expertise on display. Your contirbution is most welcome.

Really liked the plot, wish it was longer and more developed and curious as to how her prom turned out.

Love the story as much as there is. Some of the time lines don't jib, but that is minor fixing. Would love to read how Kelly turns out at the prom and after. Please finish the story. LOL, J-Lynn

Val - This story stands on its own.  The "II" on the title is just there so that the story wouldn't have the same title as one by another author; presumably identical titles foul up the search system (or did, when this one was first submitted in 2001).

Samantha - Looking forward to the rest, but IMO you need to do something about Dave's parents; sending them away on a two-week cruise was OK for the setup, but at the start of part five you say this con job has now been going on for months.

Eric

I've not read this yet, though it looks well-written, as I like to read part-stories in order. Does "The Dancer 1" exist?

Thanks

This story is good, but what Kirstin says is very true.

i think that this is a very readable&enjoyable story well done more please

Please continue your story! I think that it is very good, but for some reason you have chosen to stop writing it. I am hooked!

Rather cute story and a nice effort.  For what it's worth, here are some constructive criticisms.  I found the dialogue to be a little difficult to read...it would help to start with a new line each time there is a change in the speaker instead of using the same paragraph.  Pay attention to the details...Julie and her mother live in an apartment (end of Part 2) but apparently Julie's bedroom is upstairs and it's large enough to dance in.  Also...reading this story was a bit like watching a movie in "fast forward".  Take your time and develop the story instead of rushing from one scene to the next. Hopefully, these criticisms won't discourage you from continuing with this story and writing others.    

I can identify with Kelly at the end of part II.  Miss Jezzi Belle - that's me in showgirl mode - always ends her show with, "And remember:  All the world REALLY is a stage, darlings, so strutt your stuff, have fun, and give the public a good show!"  You go, girl; Keep writing!
  Jezzi

Go girl keep it coming

You did great, I can hardly wait for Part 2.  Keep up the great work.

Very good start, It NEEDs to have an end, three times as long .  GOOD LUCK !

Part 1 of thisd wonderful story is accepted.

Please keep writing this story.

This was good when is the next part ?

Keep on truckin. You're doing great.

I liked your story and found it very good but short. Please continue

Kelli

A very good start. I hope the rest of the story is as good as the first part.

The fact that Dave is petite and can even wear her tiny heels is sooo great.  Please add more,,,Thanks

Keep it going, the storyline is strong. Maybe do a fleshed out update later.

Nice start, keep going and build it out - I think you have an interesting storyline to develop here.

Please keep writing, I enjoy the start.

Very good start.  Please continue.

very good,has lots of potential. please continue.
                                                 Tracy

I hope this is the type of encouragement you need to finish this tale.

But I like it and will be waiting for more and more of your storys in the future.  I think is is a very good start. And all I can say is, More, More.

short and sweet and jeld my attention