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Dancer's Legs
by Julia Manchester

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Comment by Sandi on 03/22/21
What a wonderfully kind and generous story you have written. You’re very empathetic to the characters while remaining truthful to the storyline. I thoroughly enjoyed it and I’m completely jealous of Tammy. Good work.

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Comment by matrix on 08/25/14
Thank you for this wonderful story. You have a sensitive style of writing. I hope you will consider extending "Dancers Legs",or adding  a sequel.

Comment by Aleesha on 12/04/11
This was a wonderful and brilliantly written story. Thanks very much Julia.

Comment by Vivien on 08/27/10
an absolutely wonderful story Julia!  I sure do wish that my life had taken a turn like Tammy's!

There were moments that I had to stop reading as some parts of the story were so emotionally filled that it actually brought tears to my eyes.  

What a great writer you are!  :}

One thing I like is reading a good story written by an author who knows what they are writing or talking about and you are that person!!!


Comment by gary on 02/13/10
part 2 made me cry

Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 03/26/09
The story is really good, I liked that, but I think, the mother and the sister should be punished by the evil that they did to a boy, and not simply to say we are very sorry, and nothing happens to they!
But you are really a good writer, and I like your stories.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Karen E. Lea on 02/28/09
Hi Julia,
Great story, well written, thank you.

Karen.


Comment by Karen E. Lea on 02/28/09
Hi Julia,

Wonderful story, great characters and a great read. Thank you.

Love Karen.


Comment by Janice Lynn Miller on 06/14/07
Hi Julia, your story about Toby/Tammy was in a word great. You captured everything perfectly about his/her life and the surrounding characters such as his/her older sister June, their parents and their friends such as Matt.
Hoping to see many follow up to this story such as when Tammy goes off to college and what happens between her and Matt.
Thank you for a very special and wonderful story, Hugs to you,
J-Lynn  

Comment by Gwen Brown on 06/09/07
Hi Julia:

This was a really charming little story.

Thank you so much.

Gwenellen


Comment by Angel O'Hare on 06/09/07
WOW! First rate writing and a four star rating!

Julia, I loved this story very much and I hope you will consider posting it at the Big Closet site as well.

Huggles Julia
Angel


Comment by Rose on 06/05/07
Hi Julia,
      What a wonderful story, very very believable and extremely well written. It aslo brought a tear to my eyes as Tammy progressed though her trials and tribulations. Are you going to continue to reveal Tammy's future?. I hope you do.

Luv Rose.


Comment by Rone welles on 06/04/07
  WOW  what a wonderful and well written story ... this is a five star story for shure .... and the best ending I have read in a long long time ... THIS IS A MUST READ AND IT WILL CATCH YOUR MIND...

THANK YOU ....Rone Welles  *****  :-)


Comment by Gary on 06/04/07
Loved the story -very empathic, I was able to really "get into" the characters. More of the same!

Comment by chris2 on 06/04/07
ONE OF MY FAVORITE WRITERS STRIKES AGAIN

Comment by Tina on 06/04/07
Julia, this is a fabulous story, very well written as Kate and Brittany said. Very believable too!

Comment by Kate on 06/03/07
Thank you so much for this story. I saw it on the listing of newly posted stories and it is one of the best I have read in a long time. Very well written, thank you for the good read.

Comment by Brittany on 06/02/07
Absolute and amazing story!  Just wanted to say thanks for posting and I love your writting style.  Very well put together and well details.  I soo wish it was me!



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