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Comment by ashley on 12/12/13
i just loved this one. OH my, how I wish that it would happen to me sometime - - - - Comment by SassySue on 11/09/03 A very hot and sexy story. I love stories where the male's man boobs are converted into female tities. I think that is much more fun than using falsies. Playing with the nipples can be a real turn-on. Even in males it can be a terrific eroginous zone. Like Sheryl S. I had to play with my nipples too (maybe it's the SS initials :). Comment by Karen Anne Summerfield on 11/05/03 I stopped reading when I read, "I'm going to fuck your virgin pussy". Comment by Sheryl S. on 11/05/03 Very compelling, couldn't help playing with my own nipples as I read on. Only thing -- his continued whining began to get a bit shrill and one-note after awhile. If you do a sequel, and I think it's quite worth of a sequel, you might wish to consider having his wife confront him lovingly but firmly about letting go of his false pride and enjoying being feminine. At this point, his adventures could become more about the atmosphere of his female persona's new experiences, and less about being stripped of powers he felt ambivalent about in the first place. Please write on, I really enjoy your stuff. |
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