7YJyB2 This is my first time pay a quick visit at here and i am really pleassant to read everthing at one place.

please write more

like these types of stories - very close to the heart

I love your story. I only wish that could be me .

where is part 2 ?

I agree with Daphne---the story sounded like a weak attempt to write
straightout porn and I didn't go past the "chastity" device.Please try again.

A good story line up to the point of the three boxes. Then this loving wife turns into psycho bitch when she finds out her husband crossdresses. Why is it that all these feminized stories have to be cruel? Wheres the love? Some spelling errors combined with more than there should have been puncuation errors combined for for a weak finished product. Please proofread your work in the future, or ask somebody to do it for you. I won't even get into the continuity, phone call strapped in a chair to making dinner. Ooopsss.... I just did. Why was the strap-on introduced into the story? There was no mention of Dave being into anal play up to that point. What function did the chastity device play? Where was Mary's thought process in the text of the story on this? One can only conclude that wifey turned into some kind of monster. You did a good job in developing Dave's character, then went and threw it all away. Exactly when did Dave say he wanted to dress 24/7 en-femme? When exactly did Dave say he wanted to take hormones? Why did Dave put up with this? More depth in your story was needed to explain said.

Interesting beginning -- will there be more? I certainly hope so.

a goood start to this story its intersting to se daved is getting more than he bargained for

Contrary to Juliej's Idea of almost a prison atmosphere I fail to see
the need for such forcefull actions.  So far dave/joanna has complied
with all requests without too much complaint. Perhaps the loud reaction to the as describe large shot in the buttox has been the only
negative reaction except possibly the early on avoidance of facing the
music so to speak.
I did find it quite confusing as to how he got dinner and dressed to prepare the dinner when she left him tied and manicaled to a chair in
the kitchen except for one hand free but then we all have continuity slips.  Perhaps the keys were left handily around.
As their married life before the discovery was apparently satisfactory for both, I fail to see the rush to change her husband so
completely and quickly. Hopefully this is being done with some competent medical consultation.  Things can go tragically wrong
without.
A little fill to explain these or minor rewrite would definitely
improve the wonderful story to this point.

Wow what a great read, cant wait for it to be continued. Keep up the good work girl & get writing very very soon.

I have just finished reading this story its brilliant the way she got her husband femminised so well and secured so he could not escape from what he wished what a way to go in the next part i would like to read of hime beeing forced to sleep in the spare bedroom and age regession to a girl then back to a woman it would be brilliant also thaespare bedroom becoming more of a prison than  a bedroom a set of bars on the window agoo heavy secure lock on the door and his wife being more &more dominant to the possible extent of her taking a lover please write more soon its a brilliant start welldone