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David Goes to The Party
by Jennifer

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Comment by juliej on 07/31/07
a sweet story it smells of revenge and well executed by his sister &her freinds

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/24/07
I think Emily is a child wise beyond her years who knew her brother better than he knew "herself".  I think she knew exactly what she was doing and exactly what she hoped would be the outcome when she pushed her brother in the pond.  

Comment by Fancy Nancy on 11/27/06
A point to ponder.  Imagine a children's birthday party.  Streamers, hats, balloons, party favors, cake and ice cream.  Examine the boys. Short-to-medium-length hair.  Dress slacks.  Dress shirts.  Neckties.  Jackets.  All medium-to-dark in "color".  Now look at the little girls.  Shimmering straight long hair.  A pile of curls.  A page-boy.  A bun.  Pastel.  Lace.  Silk.  Ribbons.  Gingham.  Floor-length gowns. Puff-sleeved minidresses with attached outstretched pettis. (No matter if they have the gawkiest legs in the world - they have the right to show them.) Kneesox, bobbysox, tights, white or pastel. Black strap shoes.  Perhaps white gloves.  Maybe a little perfume.  A little bit of kid jewelry.  I ask you.  Do you really think those girls wish they could be wearing what the boys are wearing? That about sums it up.

Comment by Debilyn on 09/12/06
Consider the wonder.  A little boy using an uncomfortable mishap to escape the world of BOY and join the dearer, sweeter sex to become a little cutie-beauty-honey-pie with a name like Lucy or Debbie or Linda or Nancy or Betsy, and experience the enviable domain of long tresses needing pins and clips; short, short, frilly, lacy frocks that reach only to midthigh; long, long, legs exposed to the elements and public view; ankle-sox and Mary Janes; legs held together and careful bending; and luscious underpanties down at the ankle-sox to allow for making a most discreet wee-wee on the bowl. Fragrances.  Hugs and kisses.  Dollies.  Hide-and-seek.  Whispers.  A vacation I guess we'd all love.

Comment by juliej on 04/12/06
I ask my self was this story a set up ?it appears so the way his sister &freinds acted but a t least daved got what he wanted to in the end with his mothers understanding and thought when she caught him a number of times in his sisters dresses i wished this would happen to mewell done a sweet story

Comment by Sharonn on 04/20/03
Too bad things can't really be this way. I doubt there are that many empathetic people in my town.  Love the story though.  Much better than the violent, uncaring stories that usually inflict young boys. More. Please.

Comment by Petti Pie on 04/19/03
I loved this story!  Very sweet, gentle and warm.  Being dressed by an understanding female has always been a favorite fantasy of mine.

Comment by Pervette on 04/19/03
A delightful story. Sheer fantasy, the way the girls accepted the
situation with hardly any giggling & the way the mother did, too.
But sheer fantasy is one of the delights of this genre, so I'm not
about to complain. Nice story, nice characterization.


--Pervy

Comment by paula on 04/19/03
make me thing of a lake side camping trip I had in Jr high



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