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David’s Story
by Teddie S

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Comment by Angie on 02/12/15
This was a great story, Teddie.  It was tasteful and not at all vulgar.  Thank you so much.  Angie

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 08/10/08
    Amazing, encouraging, insightful traumatic and encouraging. Love this story and so glad you shared it with us. Don't think it needs any changes, even the dialog is good and that is usually boring. Thank you so much.

    Hugs, Kristi


Comment by Kevin on 04/10/08
Love your stories, usually. I like the shemale aspects of them most of all. But please, please I beg you . . . spellcheck, spellcheck.

Comment by Leah on 03/28/08
This entertaining and believable story offered vistas as well as insights that I'd never achieved on my own. I particularly appreciated Beth as the narrator as well as her own self-analysis late in the story as to her own basic personality. (All too often our stories assume any woman is a typical woman and nothing more -- an object, a cypher.)

Comment by Roberta Mack on 03/21/08
I found these three stories to be the best I have ever read on this site. Other than the bit with the breast implants and facial modifica-
tion, I found the stories totally believable...sometimes it is best to end at "the end".
Additionally, I appreciated your not describing sexual activities in any detail and leaving same to the reader's imagination.
Frankly, I would hope other story tellers will follow this example,and
leave science fiction and magical transformations at home, and give us believable, delightful, and hopeful stories in the future.
Wonderful !!!!!  



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