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David to Debbie
by Debra Lynn Messer

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Comment by jjconn on 08/15/17
why do the women have to torture the men after they become women voluntarily or not? i'm sure he could find someone that cares for him without having to be forced to watch your ex fuck some stranger or worse one of your old friends???

Comment by carrie on 10/20/14
lovely story of love and fullfilment

Comment by crystal on 12/05/06
Debra'
I loved your story, I only wish it could happen to me, I am so ready

Comment by Melanie on 08/29/03
Great story. All of your stories are very good. Keep up the good work.

Comment by Pervette on 08/22/03
Stories of this sort are rarely told from the woman's point of
view.  This is a refreshing change.  I also liked that little bit
at the very end where (fear not--this isn't a spoiler) the husband
ended up better off than she was.  Nice work, Debra.
.
--Pervy



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