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David to Dee Dee
by Davey Fahrner

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Comment by ashley on 11/05/13
What a nice start for the kid - - oops sorry , DEE DEE.

Comment by ftldrdl on 06/02/13
this seems like the beginning of a nice story.  but it was posted in 2006.  so like so many other beginnings of nice stories it seems unlikely to be completed...sad.

Comment by Divya on 10/04/12
Such a great story. I m waiting for the next part of the dee dee. But u did't upload. If u upload the next parth in some other site pls tell me i m waiting for ur reply.

Comment by Sissy on 01/27/11
Great story, can't wait to hear the rest of it.  

Comment by patty on 05/25/10
good story, lets hope that the transfonation continue.

Comment by mike on 03/02/09
adored the story.loved the hairstyling.style my hair and i will follow you anywhere.more!more!

Comment by TeriLynn on 01/08/08
I loved it!  I can't wait for the to continue!  

Comment by cute ass on 11/10/07
my my my i just loved the story by the end i myself was in panties .Its awesome i wish i get a Judy

Comment by Joan  Marie on 05/01/07
Darling,
What  a dreamy and wonderful  story  you sharred.  So wondeful that you  had your  Judy, well I  had a  baysitter named  Connie that first found me out at age 13.  Such tramatic  emotions engulfed, consumened and overwhelmed me so, that is  after  being  found out in my own  little feminine world. Such  compassion  she had  in my earliest and  nieve  feelings.
Needless  to say, we do  share many feelings and dreams.  And oh, yes, that first visit to the  salon was simply heavenly and  so  fulfillimg in so many ways.
Was  very  much exdited to read  Nickis  latest  story and  like you  am  looking forward to the  next chapter  with warmest  of  feminine feelings.
If you care to  girl  chat  ever  please  feel free and   we  can  share our dreams and  desires   as  only  girls can.
Hugs,
Joan

Comment by Victoria on 10/08/06
Goodness what a wonderful tale!  So many of us long to find our own 'Judy'.  You have created a world where we might follow along vicariously as David and Judy explore and expand Dee Dee's femininity'.  Where will it go...  I can't wait to read more!

Comment by juliej on 07/25/06
this was a good start to the story well explained a bit of a chance taker but it worked out welll for how much longer i wonder until she gets vicious or tired of him it must get worse before better and ilook forward to reading more with some bondage in it i hope

Comment by vicki on 07/08/06
love the hairstyling. Maybe a roller set with cum curls next so he will look like a pretty sissyboy?

Comment by Fiddler on 05/15/06
Great story.  I wanted so bad to be Dee Dee.  I loved the description of the dress and panties - your detail is outstanding.  Would love to see Dee Dee need a spanking for sneaking into Judy's soiled panties and forced to service Judy and then wear her solied underthings to bed without being allowed to cum!

Comment by Stephan(ie) on 05/12/06
Great, great story! Love the fact that Judy kept refering to David as her little girl. Just her saying that makes me feel all the more feminine. Can't wait for more chapters.....going shopping, clubbing, and hopefully, dating! Keep up the wonderful story line, please!

Comment by Sarajane on 05/08/06
I love the fact that Judy is so 'coming-on' - she makes me feel really girly as she obviously did for David.  And the hair talk is wonderful - give me more hairtalk anytime.

So when will we have some more of Judy and David?

Love from Sarajane

Comment by Candi on 05/07/06
What a marvelous story!  I simply loved everything about it and hope that you will continue to write about our sweet adorable girly boy!
Much sissy love,
Candi

Comment by Jamie on 05/05/06
Great story.I fantasize about something like this happening to me.DeeDee should be taught  to take care of your hair and nails etc.Looking forward to more.

Comment by gina on 05/05/06
this is a great story ..since i have been ito crossdressing  the working getting dirty and showering with nothing to wear has always been one of my best fantasizes........graet job at putting most of it to paper

Comment by Sara on 05/05/06
Maybe a little morning jog together in matching pink hot pants and babydoll tee shirts. Better get rid of the body hair before going outside, though.

Then just a touch of foundation, blush, eyeshadow, eyeliner, mascara and lipstick before the shopping trip.
Nothing too obvious.



Comment by Jackie on 05/04/06
MORE!!

Comment by charlize on 05/04/06
give him a perm.  Love your story

Comment by Rosemaree Day on 05/03/06
I have enjoyed the story so far and look forward to more installments  Hugz Rose

Comment by juliej on 05/03/06
an excellent start to what looks like its going to be a great story well done

Comment by Carolyn Renee on 05/03/06
Very nice start to a continuing story line. Please continue with Dee Dee's adventures. Love & Kisses Carolyn Renee



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