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A Day at School
by Mistress Cindi

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Comment by high quality backlinks on 07/18/14
2psrIS I really like and appreciate your article.Really looking forward to read more.

Comment by this is me on 08/03/12
HELL YES, you can traumatize a child without laying a finger on them! And specifically what this woman did was failure to advocacy. The kid was put in his embarrasing position for an hour and a half (thankfully while under supervision). What the mother was proposing was to put the kid in the same position for an indeterminant amount of time with no guarantee of protection. The kid was in the first grade! That's four or five years old, six on the outside. Kids are still afraid of the dark at that age. Was it a given the kid was going to be traumatized? NO! It is not nor should have been unforseeable. And No I don't think the mother got what she deserved. I think the husband overreacted.

Comment by this is me on 08/03/12
Now that was somewhat realistic. The only real problem is him becomming well rounded and his father becomming an outspoken advocate. Not that those two things can't happen they just are not so redily apparent. What about the story was apparent was his reaction to his mothers actions. I'm not sure that a caring mother would miss the signs the kid was exhibiting.

Comment by Sossy Allison on 11/06/11
can you help me be sissy

Comment by cathy on 05/12/09
I liked the story very much, I however think you should expand on it excellent job.

Comment by Dianna on 02/22/08
Thank you for recognizing that forced cross dressing and feminization has terrible results on the mind's of the victim's expecially if the victim is a child.

It's disheartening to me to see how much people enjoy destroying other people, especially when that person is someone whom you should care about.

This story is very important sugar. Thank you for writing and posting it.


Comment by Daxx on 12/05/07
Its about time someone finally adressed the psycological trauma that forced sissyfacation can have one young minds.Thanks for posting this.

Comment by stanley Morton on 07/27/07
Cindi, Looks like you are a sweet lady. I hate forced sissyhood I love it that Mom lost

Comment by julie j on 10/11/04
this  story is on track in the right direction  i can understand the school having only the clothes kid used for dressing up but for his mother to carry on the motion is a bit much i can see his fathers point of view and it took a long time for tim to get over this matter
well done good story but to short

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 05/12/03
This is a good story heading in the right direction.  What I found unbelievable was that the teacher made Tim return to class in the dress; in reality, Tim would probably have been allowed to wait by himself in the school office.  Tim, however, at least  accepted the reason for wearing the dress at school.  I think what cracked him was that his mom never gave him a reason he could accept for dressing him.  This mom didn't come across as evil/sadistic; It didn't seem like it was her intent to humiliate her son, but she was unrealistically dense and insensitive to the fact that he obviously was feeling humiliated.  I would like to know if the mom finally realized what she'd done and if she felt remorse.or if she rationalized it and blamed others.

Comment by Annie O on 05/11/03
Finally, a true-to-life story!!! Kudos to you for this wonderful expose!
 The woman got exactly what she deserved.

Comment by David2Daphne on 08/19/02
Not bad, but I'd think it would take more than what you describe to traumatize a child so severely.  Where are the beatings, the face slaps, the name-calling and humiliating chatter?  Compared to the abusive parents I've known in my lifetime, the mothers you describe are regular June Cleavers.  For instance, I remember my own stepmother slamming the door on my cat's paw when I refused to do housework in an apron; believe me, I never let that happen again!

The point is, if you're going to have the child traumatized, make it worth our while.  I know what you're trying to do, but it just doesn't cut it for me.  Forced cross-dressing can be harmful, but you're just scratching the surface in defining exactly what constitutes "forced."  Believe me, wearing an apron or a dress around the house was definitely not my favorite thing to do when I was little, but it was a lot better than other things that happened to me.

Just my two cents.

Comment by Annie O on 08/13/02
I quite agree with you that there is a downside to being a CD. I've tried many times, purging, clearing out everything! But I come back again. Why? I wish I knew. Maybe I have a partially female brain.
 Being what we are is difficult, because, well read below. I know this for sure: no one forced me to do what I do, and I don't like to see anyone forced to be what we are.

Comment by Pervette on 08/13/02
A first-rate story.  It's nice to read stories about boys who are
made to wear dresses...but the reality is likely to be not such
jolly good fun.  Yes, I enjoy forced-fem stories (as long as they
aren't *too* coercive, & I'm a bit touchy on that point), but it's
a good thing to be reminded occasionally that real life isn't like
that.  Splendid work.
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What about the mother?  That was pretty rough treatment.  Did she
deserve it?  I think so.  Some mothers can be breathtakingly
imperceptive, but when a boy of that age is crying uncontrollably,
you would have to be deaf--or dead--not to realize that something
is seriously amiss.  It's fun to live out a fantasy, & even more fun
to do so with someone else, but only if it's just as much fun for
the other person.  But I don't need to tell you that, do I?

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Pervy

Comment by JillMI on 08/13/02
Your story reminds me of the story in which the adult hero was forced to turn on his computer, go to a fantasy fiction site and read stories about cross-dressing for hours.  Oh wait!  That story would be unbelievable, as adults have the ability to choose what they will and will not do.  Such a story becoms much more believable if the hero were underage and easily shaped to certain behavior.

It is easier to believe a transformation story if the hero is pre-adolescent and is not 6'2" and 240 lbs.  It is easier to believe domination when the age and size difference is substantial.  Many of us that read stories on this site can remember childhood wishes that involved magical transformation into the lives of our sisters or the girl down the street/road.  All of this takes a back seat to the possibility that stories might influence a parent to abuse their child.  I don't think that could happen... you seemingly think it could.  This is a site devoted to fiction and fantasy.

Like you, I'm not a fan of the pre-adult forced feminization stories.  

I have a problem with the stories in which an adult uses their role as a parent or guardian to overly influence a pliable child.  Pyschologist suggests we do not receive full reasoning powers until we are in our early twenties.  

I also dislike stories that are overly violent.  

My bias seems to be for the same reasons you have written your stories.

I love the stories that involve two consenting adults who work with each other's desires in an honest, loving and caring relationship.  I also enjoy stories where obvious transgendered children are allowed to move toward their true gender (such as Texas Gal).

However, I'm tolerant of most any story, as I want people to be tolerant of me.  I believe cross-dressing is a taboo in our society, as those in power want a male-dominated society.  They do not want the differences between male and female to be blurred in any way.

For the 54 years of my life, I've felt the pain of rejection due to my base desires.  Desires that I know are harmless and very personal.

I understand and support your intent.  Please be careful that you aren't adding to the fire that consumes us all.

Please continue to write as your stories are clearly stated.

Love to you!

Jill
 

Comment by Marina 12 on 08/13/02
You story was fun to read and your writing style has lots of potential. I like how your "victims" do not like being forced to be girls and eventually get out of the situation.--Thats basically the premise for most of my own stories. Technically, I think you should make your stories a bit longer--between 20-30 pages (courier 12 single space)---long enough for a bit more "action" in the story but short enough to be published as a single episode.

As far as personal taste goes, I am a bit frustrated, that the boy(s) in your work are a bit too young---12 to 14 is the IDEAL age (IMHO)they are still at the mercy of controling adults and then we get to deal with even more "humiliating" and "exciting" aspects of TG, such as breasts and MAKEUP.---("Little girls" don't have or use either one.)---and the boys could also pass for being slightly "older" girls or women.

MARINA TWELVE

Comment by Miss Prissy Highheels on 08/12/02
I agree that you should emphasize and increase the punishment of the villains who torment children w/ the humiliation of forced feminization. Make them suffer even more than their helpless , innocent victims.

Comment by Paula on 08/12/02
another well  written and well worth reading story.

Comment by Nellie D on 08/12/02
A story that demonstrates the results of lacking communications. The mother heard the story from the rumor mill and then failed to pick up on certain cues from her son. And this lead to a full chain of events with a resulting sad ending.

The writing was good with one or two minor grammar or word slips.

Thank you for sharing, Mistress Cindy



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