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Comment by high quality backlinks on 07/18/14
2psrIS I really like and appreciate your article.Really looking forward to read more. Comment by this is me on 08/03/12 HELL YES, you can traumatize a child without laying a finger on them! And specifically what this woman did was failure to advocacy. The kid was put in his embarrasing position for an hour and a half (thankfully while under supervision). What the mother was proposing was to put the kid in the same position for an indeterminant amount of time with no guarantee of protection. The kid was in the first grade! That's four or five years old, six on the outside. Kids are still afraid of the dark at that age. Was it a given the kid was going to be traumatized? NO! It is not nor should have been unforseeable. And No I don't think the mother got what she deserved. I think the husband overreacted. Comment by this is me on 08/03/12 Now that was somewhat realistic. The only real problem is him becomming well rounded and his father becomming an outspoken advocate. Not that those two things can't happen they just are not so redily apparent. What about the story was apparent was his reaction to his mothers actions. I'm not sure that a caring mother would miss the signs the kid was exhibiting. Comment by Sossy Allison on 11/06/11 can you help me be sissy Comment by cathy on 05/12/09 I liked the story very much, I however think you should expand on it excellent job. Comment by Dianna on 02/22/08 Thank you for recognizing that forced cross dressing and feminization has terrible results on the mind's of the victim's expecially if the victim is a child. Comment by Daxx on 12/05/07 Its about time someone finally adressed the psycological trauma that forced sissyfacation can have one young minds.Thanks for posting this. Comment by stanley Morton on 07/27/07 Cindi, Looks like you are a sweet lady. I hate forced sissyhood I love it that Mom lost Comment by julie j on 10/11/04 this story is on track in the right direction i can understand the school having only the clothes kid used for dressing up but for his mother to carry on the motion is a bit much i can see his fathers point of view and it took a long time for tim to get over this matter Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 05/12/03 This is a good story heading in the right direction. What I found unbelievable was that the teacher made Tim return to class in the dress; in reality, Tim would probably have been allowed to wait by himself in the school office. Tim, however, at least accepted the reason for wearing the dress at school. I think what cracked him was that his mom never gave him a reason he could accept for dressing him. This mom didn't come across as evil/sadistic; It didn't seem like it was her intent to humiliate her son, but she was unrealistically dense and insensitive to the fact that he obviously was feeling humiliated. I would like to know if the mom finally realized what she'd done and if she felt remorse.or if she rationalized it and blamed others. Comment by Annie O on 05/11/03 Finally, a true-to-life story!!! Kudos to you for this wonderful expose! Comment by David2Daphne on 08/19/02 Not bad, but I'd think it would take more than what you describe to traumatize a child so severely. Where are the beatings, the face slaps, the name-calling and humiliating chatter? Compared to the abusive parents I've known in my lifetime, the mothers you describe are regular June Cleavers. For instance, I remember my own stepmother slamming the door on my cat's paw when I refused to do housework in an apron; believe me, I never let that happen again! Comment by Annie O on 08/13/02 I quite agree with you that there is a downside to being a CD. I've tried many times, purging, clearing out everything! But I come back again. Why? I wish I knew. Maybe I have a partially female brain. Comment by Pervette on 08/13/02 A first-rate story. It's nice to read stories about boys who are Comment by JillMI on 08/13/02 Your story reminds me of the story in which the adult hero was forced to turn on his computer, go to a fantasy fiction site and read stories about cross-dressing for hours. Oh wait! That story would be unbelievable, as adults have the ability to choose what they will and will not do. Such a story becoms much more believable if the hero were underage and easily shaped to certain behavior. Comment by Marina 12 on 08/13/02 You story was fun to read and your writing style has lots of potential. I like how your "victims" do not like being forced to be girls and eventually get out of the situation.--Thats basically the premise for most of my own stories. Technically, I think you should make your stories a bit longer--between 20-30 pages (courier 12 single space)---long enough for a bit more "action" in the story but short enough to be published as a single episode. Comment by Miss Prissy Highheels on 08/12/02 I agree that you should emphasize and increase the punishment of the villains who torment children w/ the humiliation of forced feminization. Make them suffer even more than their helpless , innocent victims. Comment by Paula on 08/12/02 another well written and well worth reading story. Comment by Nellie D on 08/12/02 A story that demonstrates the results of lacking communications. The mother heard the story from the rumor mill and then failed to pick up on certain cues from her son. And this lead to a full chain of events with a resulting sad ending. |
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