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Daydreams Can Come True
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Comment by WannabeGinger on 08/14/09
Lots of love to you... and thanks for writing a simply lvely no-conflict story which i wish I'd come across before. If you've written other pieces like this, I'll be an avid fan! I'd love your views on my won writings.. LOL WbG xx Comment by Molly on 09/02/08 Michael might consider finding a better way to calm his nerves, not to mention wearing a sweeter fragrance, before he goes to visit his neighbor and model her clothes. Comment by (AJ) Eric on 08/13/06 Hadn't read your stories until your new one got posted this week. They're really enjoyable -- nicely written and concisely constructed. Very good examples of the no-conflict side of TG writing. Comment by julie on 09/30/03 an excelllent story some with the same sort of theme but with different reactions from other people, and finally leslie is spelt wrong it should be lesley more please Comment by Annie O on 12/13/02 Some stories are worth commenting on twice! Comment by Sandy Walker on 11/16/02 Hi Lisa, Comment by Darein on 06/05/02 Wow! Talk about dreaming my dreams and reading my mind. Awesome story or was it just a story? I know I wish it could come true for me! Comment by Arianwen Morgana on 12/28/01 A very nicely written piece! I was very sorry to have reached the end, as I wanted to have more of "Michelle's" life played out. This story is a great summation of exactly what I would like to happen to me in real life... but that's why they call it fiction, eh? Comment by Diane Sutton on 12/01/01 A nice story and well written. I enjoy reading many stories like this one and only wish it was really happening to me. Please continue with more. However, I'd appreciate it if you could make them a little longer as I don't want to stop reading them. Comment by TinaTVuk on 08/15/01 Lisa Comment by Annie O on 08/15/01 Have lots and lots of dreams like this!! Then write, and don't spare us any detail! |
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