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Day Home From School
by Jessica Marie

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Comment by Aleesha on 10/18/10
Not bad but I wish you had continued the story more.

Comment by Vicki Stewart on 01/01/09
Hi Jessica,
           Quite good for a fictional fairy story, 'but', not in the real world.
There's no mention of the boy actually being caught wearing his sister's clothes,
everyone appears to accept everything without question, (including the mother).
Good try, but I'm sorry, no cigar.
Kind regards. Vicki.xx

Comment by juliej on 08/03/07
i stand by my previous comments

Comment by julie j on 08/02/04
intresting but needs far more work it seemed to easily that mother took it some calmey could be a great story but more work good effort

Comment by Angel on 01/14/04
Needs work, rushed, characters not developed or described. I would put it at the par of P. Jutras's writing.

Comment by onedog on 10/20/03
check your ratings Not G rated

Comment by dillon doe on 10/19/03
not bad.. seems a bit rushed



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