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The Day I Became My Girlfriend's Girlfriend!
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Comment by thruholewizard on 01/14/15
I guess it is too long to expect a part 2 > what a shame . I thought it is a beautiful start to a great story ......hoping for more . Comment by leelee on 07/15/09 Count me in as one of those that DEMAND you get at part 2 now It is a sweet story that I am sure many of us can relate to At least those of us who found our cd confession acataully increased our sex and feminization. A woman always makes it better huh? It is a sweet G rated story but maybe you could move to R and get this new girl functioning as a real woman just a suggestion Comment by John on 12/03/07 Hi, nice start to the story. Please continue? (It's been five years, about.) Comment by juliej on 11/27/07 sweet story part 2 please Comment by david on 10/23/06 where the heck is part two ?????????????????????? Comment by Happy Reader on 04/17/03 Excellent beginning and content. Please do not keep us waiting too long for the second instalment! Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/23/02 Well, yes Faye, it is way too short, even for a beginning. But you do have a nice story going here and now it needs to be continued. The ending in part one was too open ended even for me. Comment by TinaCortina on 07/18/02 What a little tempter! Loved the start; Would like it really to last longer to prolong the fantasy, but who's fussy! Comment by Paula Jutras on 07/18/02 Wonderful start of the story and look forward to of these sweet characters. Even I have to agree it could be longer. Comment by Natalie on 07/17/02 Nice premise and the characters seem nice as well. My only complaint is that it's so short! It'd be nice to have seen the relationship develop a bit more. Comment by Rose on 07/16/02 Great Story and one that has you waiting for part 2. |
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