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A Day of Firsts
by Kathryn Nelson

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Comment by ashley on 06/04/16
Quite a nice chummy story.
Comment by dawn on 03/20/14
lovely feminine story well done
Comment by Grilyboy x on 05/27/11
Well writen, entertaining and tantalising start. Hopefully much more to come. x
Comment by Patty on 02/23/10
A warm story which brings a honest value to the joys of dressing
Comment by Silvia. on 05/30/09
I'm sorry, but that isn't a good story.
Hugs.
Silvia.
Comment by DEE on 10/03/07
VERY WARM LIGHT HEARTED STORY WHICH I'M GLAD I FOUND. IT WAS
THOROUGHLY ENJOYABLE WITH AGOOD NUMBER OF HUMOROUS MOMENTS.
Comment by WannabeGinger on 08/20/07
Love the way you've started - I'll look out for further chapters.   Get Polly to go for broke on the hair and beauty side of the relationship please
Comment by Cathy on 10/13/05
I loved the story. It reads beatifully, and is very true to real life - like being 'read' even though you think you're convincing.

What a good neighbour Chloe is.

Will there be more on this?
Comment by Sheryl S. on 08/21/03
Marvelously warm and totally consistent internally.  I love the relationships between Polly and her alter-egos.  Chloe had just the right mix of whimsy and warmth.  Please write a sequel.  I can hardly wait to read it.

Love, Sheryl S.
Comment by leah on 08/21/03
Peter, Polly and Chloe  -- What a nice three- er - two-and-a-halfsome!

Chloe is salt-of-the-earth, and I'll bet it just might be several episodes before Polly and her alter ego manage to bed the friendly neighbor. At least, I certainly hope this dynamic trio are back soon.

What a rich treatment of a tv situation!

     leah
Comment by Pervette on 08/21/03
Sweet story, sweet lady. How many of us would like to have a
neighbor like that.
.
--Pervy
Comment by TinaCortina on 08/21/03
Nice story with a few twists made a change from the usual jumping straight into bed!!  Thanks, I read your others now!!
Lobe Tina xx


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