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The Day Of The Triddifs
by Annalise Barker

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Comment by Briar on 03/17/08
What I would like to know is how did you get into my dream?   Exactly what you have written here is what I dreamed about after I read "The Day of the Triffids".  The idea of all those empty shops full of lovely clothes to dress up in, and nobody to stop me!

You write well.  That was a good story.  But I am not happy about having other people getting into MY dreams.

Comment by hippie cheerleader on 03/16/08
Dear Annalise: I've seen at least two film versions of DAY OF THE TRIFFIDS and read the novel. Cute idea to use that plot as a jumping off point for your story. You could leave the story as is; but there could definitely be further adventures of/for Anna and Julia. Are you a science fiction fan? Have you seen/read other "after the disaster" films or books? I'm assuming you are English... (I've visited England 8 times-- big fan of Fairport Convention, Steeleye Span, etc etc). I'm a cross dresser myself, and do enjoy a "preppy"/school girl/ nice girl kind of look that I give a "hippie" accent with long hair wigs and appropriate accessories like a peace sign pendant. I don't do more "formal" looks, but that's just personal taste. I look forward to reading more of your work. Feel free to write me at the above address.
Peace-- hippie cheerleader.  


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