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Dead Meat
by Margaret Jeanette

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Comment by Silvia. on 10/27/09
It's a very bad story!
I don't like!
Silvia.

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 03/18/08
Mistress Katherine got everything she wanted and more. Now she has a maid and sex toy who once thought he could sleep with anyone he chose. A fitting punishment; though he seems to be beginning to enjoy it. Perhaps occasional corporal punishment, bondage and humiliation may be in order.

Comment by julie j on 01/03/05
i aggree this was downwright cruel but a lesson to be learnt about not being unfaithfull what  a fool to sign the last paper in my  case it would have been take the money &go what a way to learn a hard lesson i also think anyone whom would be unfaithfull should have this sort of treatment

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 11/22/04
Well, readers complained about your usual stories, myself included occasionally, and you have shown us that you can, indeed, write "outside your box".  Bravo!  It even has a happy ending, as he enjoys his new role; it is almost as if Katherine and Mona are guiding him and teaching him rather than punishing him. - a win/win ending.

Comment by Early June on 11/20/04
Gee Jeanette!  That is downright cruel.I guess though, in a way he deserved it. He did ruin the marriage.  But to put him into bondage while she has stripped him of everything is pretty harsh. If she can keep him happy that way, I suppose it might work out.  I will tell you, I thought that it was going to be disclosed, the trainer had been hired to have sex with him as a set up fro the photographrt and the rep.  That would have worked too.  I was confused. How could he have sex with his trainer, when the predicament he was in was caused by his infidelity. It was a given that his wife would know of it.  Oh well. I am used to your usual and most of them have happy endings.  You were able to do well with this type of story too.  Thank you for sharing. I do enjoy your tales.



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