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Dead or Alive
by Shmuel Yacobi

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Comment by John Omohundro on 01/31/05
I agree with "Curious".

Not only is this story poorly written, but there is *NO* cricket stadium in Seattle, Washington.

In the United States, the games are called "football" and "baseball", not "rugby" and "cricket". Also, the game that the English and Europeans know as "football", Americans call "soccer".


Comment by Kimmy on 01/08/05
This story is dippy dew!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment by Curious on 01/02/05
UM I DONT SEE ANY TG IN THIS STORY AND WHERE IS THE BODY SUITS THAT THE CATEGORY INDICATED THERE'D BE? AS TO BEING MADE INTO A MOVIE, IT'S ALREADY BEEN DONE. this is a tg site for tg stories i dont think this piece of (put your own expletive here) with its disjointed choppy sentences and doubled up sentences deserves to reside here you need to pick up your act and have a proof reader go over it first.



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