a heavey story but intresting and well laid out

When males think themselves important and strong
There's but one place that they do belong-
That's under strict Lesbian rule
As they learn every male is a fool
When forced to wear bra, stockings and thong!

Ah, another great story with the premise that ONLY Lesbians know the best way to handle the inferior sex....

a great story well worth the read more please

This is the best story I've read in a while.  I can't wait for more parts to it.

Good story , When I bring it up part 5 anpart 6 are the same.
Kerri

this is a great synopsis for a story the effect will be traumatic to him next part soon please

Dear Kayla
Your story reads like a frantic synopsis.  The reader can get just the merest glimpse of what you are thinking.  This is frustrating because there are some promising ideas which could be developed into a really worthwhile and unusual story.
It is worth seeing if one of the volunteer editors (follow the link in authors corner) can help you develop your ideas into something of which you can be proud.  I truly hope so.
Hugs Annabel

Wow! Two whole paragraphs.
Maybe next time you can post only one.

This is more of a "story treatment" than a story.  That is, it's kind of an outline of a story you'd like to tell, but it's not the story itself.  Either that, or it's the Cliff Notes version!