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Dear Mandy
by Patricia Violet

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Comment by Priscilla Ann on 01/22/08
Wow! Mistress Tricia certainly deflowered Jessica in a big way and got him/her ready for a life of servitude to his Mistress Mandy. Wow. ideed!

Comment by juliej on 01/17/08
its a very good domme story fast paced could be a lot longer well done

Comment by lee lee on 01/07/08
Wow   except for the ten smacks on the ass this is certainly my kind of DOMME story.  Not cruel but cunningly naughty. I kept trying to put my self in Jake's place to figure out what was going through his silly sissy mind to tell his wife.  I would love to have a sequeal letter written by his wife to his DOMME as it seems the DOMME wants to give him more training.  The quick slide from Jake to Jessica was nice because like all of us sissies we would love to be feminized in our names too.  Anyway it was nice, clean, nauaghty and left an opening for MORE   thank hon



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