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Debbie at 19
by Debbie Valentine

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Comment by wendy k hill on 09/10/23
I am so glad I am not the only one to have read your Debbie story but the last one STUNNING the black stockings the red dress black choker and red lipstick sets my mind on fire with sheer desire ( being the girl or being the boy) Keep safe keep smiling Love ( @ LUST) Wendy Xxxx

Comment by laura on 03/26/14
lovely erotic story leading to fulfilment as a woman well done



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