Never gamble more than you can afford to loose...words to live by and a good story to show what can become of it.  Janet, you are quite the writer.

This was a great story. I think its kinda short but well written anyway. I love all your storys so far. Your my favorite writer on here.

Diane Sutton is correct, Too short!!! Other than that, I loved it. The way Diane's grandparents come to his aid is sweet. But why Grandma started Diane on the pill is a mystery. Now Diane is a woman, she needs her story as a woman told

Too short, Janet, you leave us always wanting more. How you cram, so much into such a short story is amazing to me. The more stories I read of yours the more I seem to want, it's like an addiction. I do like longer stories, especially by you. I can understand how a mother would feel about finding her son in such a predictament. And you have that uncanny ability to put into words those thoughts. You released through your story the feelings that surely, a real mother would have. I did find something that I should have questioned, but due to prior comments I won't touch on it. Still, I loved your story and eagerly look forward to many other tales from you. I think anyone who gets the opportunity to read these comment before the story should give your story a try.

A story of a mis-adventure with a typical Janet ending. A minor gambling, loosing and the way the bookie has him pay up. But other things intrude.

Janet I have read your storys for along time and love your work. I do wish you had fleshed Kevin out more in this story. BUT I STILL LOVE YOUR WORK. Thankyou.