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Deceit
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by me suba on 12/21/18
H0bM7p There is definately a great deal to find out about this issue. I really like all the points you have made.
Comment by Mariah on 05/15/13
I must agree with Jayne Louise and all she said about vengeance.  I would like to add that sometimes vengeance is necessary to adequately deliver a strong message, yet there are times such as in this story when it will define a new beginning that makes us wholesome.  Yes, Angela did hurt her mother and I feel she handled it right.
She did also prove herself by helping her mother and showing she had qualities above and beyond what her parents had ever previously displayed.  Great writing Janet I really enjoyed this one!
Comment by Jayne Louise MacGregor on 09/20/07
Lovely story, and such a powerful moral message to all of us who sometimes feel like letting vengeance take over.  Keep writing such wonderful stories please Janet!  Love and hugs, Jayne.
Comment by stanley morton on 08/01/07
very much like my anger. here, the girl must come to terms with her mom but as of this story, is not seeing anyone. janet, she needs to be completed. her story is still to be told i am sorry, but i am a hopeless romantic
Comment by Denise R on 09/23/01


 Janet

  Just read your latest posting story and have to admit it is a little different from the rest of your stories but still very good.  You are still doing great stories and I really like reading them.  Keep up the good work and I will wait for your next posting.

 Smiles,
 Denise
Comment by jill koch on 09/21/01
I love your story.


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