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Daniel should not be forced to do what Liz and Rosy wanted.
They should let DD be a girl gradually, and not forcing her.
But the story is good.

This was one of the most beautiful stories i have read,for a 16 year
old girl she was wall experienced.I would also love to read more
about Deede and Sarah,what happened to Ann?

I just finished reading part 8 and when I got to the bottom and seen "The End" I couldn't help but want to know more ... I sincerely hope thet you bring the Deedi and Sarah into further development in future stories
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By the way this was a wonderful story

Entertaining enough.
There are a few spill chucking errors, but I have read worse.
Imagine, these two beauties could be walking right under my office window...
Well it's nice to imagine, at least.
They seem to drive to London a lot... everyone I know here prefers the train?

Rob,
Can you get someone to check your story a bit before you submit it. I am fed up reading Cloths instead of Clothes and a new one on me Thee instead of Three.
Back to the story, its shaping up but there are lots of diversions that don't really add to the overall storyline

Re Part Eight:
Matter of taste, I suppose, but less sex and more story would be my preference.  Hard to believe we haven't gotten to Deedi (or rather Daniel) at the solicitor's office yet, inasmuch as we've had half a chapter since then with no plot movement at all.

And inserting entire paragraphs from Sarah's story instead of letting her explain what happened seemed rather awkward, since they amounted to a digression here rather than a plot element.

Eric

Good start   ...  Sarah needs to complete her srs or at least look into it ....she will get in to serious problems ,,,,,, how about hormone treatments .....please finish we need to know....and it will give you something to do to keep out of trouble...
thank you...    rone

part 3 and part 4 appear to be the same.  Story is enjoyable and appears to be one of the first or second attempts by this author. The verbage itself is a bit simplistic, but I see potential.  And as I said, the story line itself is enjoyable.

Great story, passionate,caring and very readable.  I read the first two chapters when they first came out.  I sat down and reread the story and liked your feelings of compassion for Daniel.  His aunt and cousin were able take a very sad boy and mold him into a very realistically portrayed young female.  I am looking forward to finding out what happens next with Robin. Keep writing and hurry up with the next installment.

Lori Michelle

its a good story but it could be longer well written &most enjoyable

hi,  this is a great story please continue, and so nice to be set in the uk.

Lovely story - real life stuff, could be genuine and I'm full of belated envy! Keep up the good work and stay on the realistic gentle track

Great second part. Can't wait for the next part.

A really promising start to a series. Just the sort of story I love to read. I agree with the other contributors that it's a pity his mother will not be able to see her 'daughter' and help  him with his dressing. I very much look forward to the next episode.
Belle.

  yes very good start to a series  please write more as soon as possible

Really great start for the series.  I hope that you will post the next chapter really soon.  I do feel the same as Claire, that it is ashame that her Mother dies before seeing her new daughter.

Huggs
Michelle

I have to agree with Carolyn its a great start to what looks to be an interesting story. Its a shame that the mother didnt get her moment though.

Very nice start to a series my dear. I must admit that I am jealous and would love to be in Deedi's shoes!  Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee