SxWm4m I think this is a real great post.Really looking forward to read more. Really Great.

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I really liked the story. It was well written and held my attention throughout. What I didn't like so much was the abrupt ending. This story could've gone on for another couple of chapters in which to explore the lives of the two sissies together in servitude and bondage. However, I suppose the story had to end somewhere. lol Again, great storytelling and imagination.

Tammy

Bad and disgusting story you wrote.
Silvia.

my 2nd reading its a brilliant story well wrth the read, but i also stand by my prevcious comments brilliant well done

a great story but very sad the way everyone went through it a twist in the tail at the end how could all this go on without his parents knowing surley they would have noticed something

Love the storyline.  I can relate to so many of the sequences but am willing to concede that not everything I like is what everybody else likes.  I've learned to take the good with the bad, like getting a whipping from a female strict disciplinarian is not the same as being beat on by a gorilla.  I've been in the first situation, the second was being subjected to The Big R by an obvious poorly conceived TV.  And during a phase of my TV life, I've had to perform, not only on TV's but on curious and exploring males.  I was glad that that Mistress decided to leave the scene but only after 'referring' me to a second Mistress (referring meaning sold) whom I happily serve today.  A lot of it is my own attitude, you can't be fighting it all the time, when they got you, your male life is over.  Period.  Thanks for the marvelous story.  

Thanks to everyone for their comments.  I can appreciate that some of the subject matter of this story can be distasteful to more sensitive readers.  Unfortunately, life and literature are not always pretty and somebody needs to write about the dark side of life as well.  Personally, I think parts of V.C. Andrews novels contain more disturbing content, but I'm not V.C. Andrews, so I realize I can't expect the same critical acclaim.

Still, I wanted my first story to be gritty and spur discussion, and it appears it has done that.   I never read that slave quote that Jezzi Belle mentioned but I will not disagree that the two teens were abused and broken of spirit.  

The question you have to ask yourself is: Were they nonetheless happy?  If a person (who has known freedom) is truly happy being a slave, then is it wrong to enslave them?  In other words, in any symbiotic relationship, is there really a right or wrong?  If one person likes to be punished, and the other person likes to punish, and they are both happy, can we really say either of them is wrong?  

I wrote this story because by the time I was a pre-teen, being Chris was my fantasy.  If someone had come along and fulfilled that fantasy, would it have been wrong even though it made me happy?  The only difference between myself and Chris is that Chris hadn't been a long-time crossdresser, nor had he had those fantasies.  But if he learns to enjoy being a sissy slave, does it matter that he was forced into it?

Thanks for all the comments, and keep them coming.

-Ami

<<  When Monica got terminally ill, the other slaves had to be let go, but Tabitha and I stayed around to take care of our mistress. We loved her in our way. When she died, we were both sad. >>

This is an exact quote from a former househnold slave in South Carolina.  It was recorded by a WPA writer in the 1930's when the former slave was in his eighties.

"When Freeddom came, the other slaves had to be let go, but Roxanne and me stayed around to take care ol' Missus.  we loved her in our way. When she died, we both sad."

This is not a happy ending despite the love of Chris and Tabitha.  The story title became true not only for Chris but Tabitha, too.  Monica, like the real ol' Missus, won, and degraded two normal teenagers into real slaves.  she didn't just abuse their bodies, she abused and broke their minds.

This said, the story was written well and certainly kept me reading despite my distaste for the subject matter.

I am sorry but I must say I did not like way a bully and a grown man  raped a young boy it so horrid a thing for an adult to do to a child.This is the way I feel .

  I absolutely love the whole story. I long to find out if "Chrissy's new freind is the "girl" from school?. That would be how they would know if Chris is wearing as instructed.

I had to laugh when I got this photo evidence of my point from Lara Flynn Boyle at the Golden Globe awards.  You may not like my concept of lengthy ribbons on ballet shoes, but this proves that they are out there...

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Again, I concede that these shoes are not conventional or authentic, but they do exist.

-Ami

Thank you for your comments.  I think I should just remind people to consider the point of view of the story.  Chrissy is not a long-time cross-dresser at this point in the story, and knows little to nothing about girls clothes.  Some descriptions might sound ignorant, but to have Chrissy be an expert on feminine fashion would be even more unbelievable.  I had to try to dumb down the descriptions of items to novice level to keep the story in character.

Also, my sister was in ballet, and I admired her clothes enough to know all about ballet outfits.  I also know that you can purchase novelty ballet items that are not traditionally seen in performance (and any good ballet teacher would scoff at).  Not only that, but ribbon can be freely purchased from any fabric store.  Let's try to keep an open mind here folks!

-Ami

> Mistress Monica proceeded to put pink, silk ballet slippers on my
> foot and lace the long silk ribbon all the way up my calf, where
> they tied just below my knee.

Ooops!  The ribbons on ballet shoes do not go all the way up to
below the knee.  On pointe shoes, the ribbons do not go up beyond
the narrowest part of the calf.  Other shoes normally have no
ribbons at all, just elastics.  Feminization, to be truly effective,
must be authentic.

Pervy

Keep up the great work looking for part IV

Created in me a powerful need to re-read "One Way Out" by Anne
O'Nonymous.

Pervy

I think the presense of a female would add greatly to hi humiliation
so perhaps next time if you continue the story you might add one?
 Other than thatb I thought it was a good story,keep up the good work.
                      Dixie