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Demoted to Diapers
by Derry

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Comment by julih on 02/01/13
good story leson to be learned

Comment by Missy on 12/16/06
Not too bad for an idea, but there is no psychology involved.  What is he thinking as he is diapered? He just allows himself to be diapered with the same emotions as getting on a bus!  Is he humiliated?  Did the ladies have to pin him down?  As a story, this has all the emotional impact of bland oatmeal.  Instead of churning out stories, try one that has some real dialogue, emotions, and makes us, the reader, FEEL what is going on.



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