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Denise and Monica
by Denise Plus

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Comment by Teagally on 07/29/04
Hi there denise we think your story rocks and can't wait to hear part 2! A+++

Comment by leah on 07/17/04
I'm sure by the time Denise+ gives us parts 2 and 3, we will have discovered what is going on. -- Let's not be impatient so quickly; after all we only have 60 seconds reading time invested. Odds are against it, but we MAY be in on the creation of a slightly new art form.

Go for it, D+!

Comment by Pippa K. on 07/16/04
Let's see...  Including title, by-line, and "the end,"  I see you've blessed us with 164 words.  On the other hand, all things about the work considered, it seems more than enough.

Comment by Alison (Melbgirls) on 07/16/04
Nice one Denise, it's great to see one of our own put there work out in the public domain! Looking forward to part 2

Comment by Donna on 07/15/04
  I presume one of these Tgirls is a blonde, otherwise what's the point you are trying to make?



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