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Destiny of Control
by Jennifer White

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Comment by mia miata on 08/10/13
What an incredible story by a brilliant author. i felt as if it were happening to me...or well..i almost hate to admit this...i wished it could have been happening to me. All of the Author's stories have become like treasured memories. Yes...they have burrowed irretrievable into my subconscious where they now live with a life of their own.
                           Thank You Ms. White

Comment by juliej on 02/25/06
an intersrting story but not much of a fight put up the bondage was very mild i would like to have red of a stronger person fighting hard to oppose her will but he semed to have very little fight in him the other point ifeel that was besause destiny had uploaded pictures of him to her pc he had no bones or skill to fight with iwould like some more bondage &sme cageing would have made it better but stil a resomnable story



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