very, very bad story.

I found the plot most stimulsting.  Fo my own pleasure I have written an ending in which the heroine admits to liking the sensation and asks for more time restrained. She finds herself wearing welded on restraints and a tight burqa. So attired She is put into a solitary confinement cell and told that her stay is to be indefinate.  She is not allowed to talk. Salvation is at hand but our heroine doesn't know it yet,(because I have not written it!)

Just wanted you to know that I enjoyed the story very much.  It would be interesting to see if a relationship could develop between Christine and Daisy.  I also would like to know the motivation for Angel's participation in fulfilling the fantasy for Daisy.

I concur with the above comments by Mysti and Stormie

The story had some chilling elements. The actual detention was fleeting (probably intentionally) and somewhat confusing in the setup and execution. If you choose to explore this theme again, may I suggest that you could render it even more chilling and Kafkaesque with a slightly different setup (the protagonist wears a genuine jail outfit rather than a tarted-up one), the trap is sprung a little more slowly, and the protagonist actually is believed by the authorities to be a prisoner- or,  maybe lure him into a meeting room at the facility where he is dressed,  made up and coiffed  to look just like the real fugitive, their IDs are switched, and she then makes her escape.  This was hinted at but not carried to full fruition in the story.

You captured wonderfully the difference of wanting versus actually getting. I also enjoyed the level of detail provided in describing the application of the restraints. Wonderful story. I'd like to see a longer version in which our heroine would remain in prison for the weekend.