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Devin's Torment
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Comment by suba me on 12/20/18
OKo022 This website truly has all the info I needed about this subject and didn at know who to ask. Comment by mike on 06/28/11 Jesus, I realy don't know what to say other than if she had kidnapped me , the first chance I got she would not not live to see her next moment Comment by Yoron on 05/29/08 Sick. Comment by juliej on 02/29/08 brilliant more please Comment by Teri Lee on 10/04/07 I just found this story too bad you didn't continue. I really liked the kidnapping and rape angle. I've had fantasies about the same thing hapening to me. Some gurls have all the luck! But the BDSM put me over the top I got wet just reading it. Comment by juliej on 01/14/07 this is a great story but again surely this must be the time for another part please do not leave us hanging about for more Comment by juliej on 09/16/05 i like this story but surely it must be time for a 2nd part Comment by julie j on 11/17/04 a great story i am begining to enjoy this one with sugestion i would have him put in a cage and locked in as well as bein dresses as a schoolgirl i would also like to know a bit more about the girl how&why and the slow transition to devlin being forced to be a girl on a permanant basic not so much violence with her feet &hand with toys& whips etc its fine also i would like to se him made up and as many other things that are possible to make a great start to a brilliant finish this setting could be based on an ex girlfreinds revenge or just a mistress who likes to find and sort out men but i would love to know the reason behind this girls attitude. Comment by No, I'm me on 05/11/04 nice story, Comment by Me on 05/07/04 Good story! Not quite my cup of tea, but its definatly interesting. : ) Comment by Sharonn on 05/07/04 I'm sorry to say this is almost disgusting. Crossdressing is a beautiful thingt to me and turning it into ....? is painful. Do us all a favor and turn it around somehow or maybe find a S&M site to post on. I personally will not follow on with something like this. |
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