A nice story to let my imagination run with true, things don't happen like this in real life but if I was country club material maybe I would feel different.

Now we know who the sensblie one is here. Great post!

I am appalled at several of your stories involve 16 and 17 year olds going to night clubs and ording drinks.  If you are going to write stories where the "girls" going to night clubs and drinking.. at least have them of legal age or maybe you don't care about the law of the land.  This tells me something about yourself in bold letters.  Furthermore, a lot of your stories are the same and have some of the same paragraphs in them.  Try being original and put more adventure into your stories instead of just crossdressing and dating.  Be creative such as Crystal was in telling us about my two favorite characters, namely Darla Ann and Crystal Ramsey.  Yours are pretty much the same with just a little twist between them.  Also, watch your grammar because you start I and then say her which is inconsistent.  Your stories otherwise are readable but could be better because I feel you do have the talent to write but I hope you try to do better.

I Have to say that this is one of your best stories. I like the upbeat feel to the story and I like the fact that Diane has had the loss of her parents to deal with and the difficulty of transitioning, the story is not filled to the brim with her inner turmoil. I see a lot of stories out there that are like that and while it adds depth to the character, it makes reading a story very tedious. Keep up the good work.

WOW!! From dressing as Diane for his sister to Marrying her Husband, Diane grows into a true lady. Too bad their parents were killed, but ten their new mom helped Diane become a woman.

A well formed story that contains an abundance of wonderful events. I'm sure the time table for some of the effects of the hormones should have been longer from personal experience but for the most part we should remember that these stories are not real and with that in mind I find this story very enjoyable.

I'd love to have someone treat me as Duane had been treated by his sister and then by his aunt. And the love that was afforded the new Diane was another of the things that I've missed in my life.

It's always a pleasure to read Janet's stories and she has continued her fantastic writings with this story as well.

Diane

PS: I just love the name she picked for her character......

this was a very good and well written story,andin fact brought tears to my eyes.Keep up this good work