HDb9ff Yeah bookmaking this wasn at a high risk conclusion great post!

I'm enjoying the story, would love to see the next chapters written about his total feminization,Possibly body modification,turned into a Shemale, then find out his wife is having a lesbian affair with her friend Mary. and when he finally returns to be their servant maid His wife and Mary who include him in their bed, not to be cuckolded per say, and he truly becomes happy with having to service them and they in turn take care of him. Least ways, that's my thoughts, : )

This is sickening and disgusting!
You're not a writer.
Silvia.

I,M CONFUSED BY THIS
SADISTIC ACCOUNT OF NOTHING

i stand by my previous comments

This seemed to me to be senseless, unreal, disjointed, meaningless and sadistic  story.

an intesting story getting better as it goes alone well explained

a good story but needs more padding out and it needs to be slower itis interesting with the amount of cp involved but iwould like to know how it all began did his wife have her suspicions and it sems everone was in on it further progression in another part would be better

I think its a great story. I only wish you'd take more time with each moment. Develop things a little more. Its moving too fast.

I read/scanned the two parts and doubt that will read any more. Too cruel for my likings. If I do read more, I hope to find his escape and revenge on those who abuse him.

good start,, man loves his wife,,sent off to be abused,,it should happen, then he should escape,,and reak havock on each of his abusers ,at school and at home,,hope you let it happen,,,gettin back with wife ?????getting even is a must

Very interesting start.  Nice build up.  Deserves to be continued soon.  Keep up the good work.

SS

The lack of comments should inspire you to continue the story, just in spite. Seriously, write for yourself, and enjoy the experience of creation and doing.
  And, there really hasn't been that much, just a build-up and a hanging on -- what happens next? does he return home? when? is he a changed 'man' -- questions to be asked and answered.

I liked your story very much, and I think you should continue it.

Didn't anybody like the beginning of this story?  I'm amazaed at the lack of response...but this remains my favorite web site in the whole world.  Love you all!
Clarissa.

Because his wife and Mary don't seem to like him.  Beyond that I'm kind of tired of the "caught with consequences" story line - sometimes people just do stuff!

Why?  And why isn't he wondering why?