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by Jennifer White

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Comment by awesome site on 11/20/13
qRHRF9 Muchos Gracias for your article post. Really Great.

Comment by this is me on 07/30/12
That one was fun. Thank you.

Comment by this is me on 07/30/12
Now this one starts off fun! I hope it continues to be.

Comment by rone welles on 10/31/06
 nice story I loved it  the family realy found out what was needed ..  the way it was done is great  and uneek we can only dream of such things...
thank you for a good story  XO Rone

Comment by juliej on 03/09/06
iliked this story it was most impressive with a very understanding mother&sister what a way to go tying to teach him a lesson backfired but he wants to be a girl so his family help him this was another good story and it could have carried on further with things like what happend at school etc well done

Comment by suna on 02/08/06
I enjoyed the story very much.  All I could do is laugh thinking what was in he/r mothers mind at the end ... OOOPS !  

once again the 'cure' dosent work..  thank you very much.



Comment by Happy Reader on 10/01/04
Super story!  Thank you for such an enjoyable read!  Keep up the writing!

Comment by sarajane on 09/30/04
I love this story.  It captures so well the intimate sensations of being en femme which I know so well - looking down at your breasts, feeling the long hair sweeping your shoulders, the earrings swinging, the swirl of the skirt, the tightness of the bra.   For me those are the quintessential experiences - and Tommy captures them beautifully.  Can we have some more please.

Sarajane

Comment by Paula on 09/30/04
can't that happen to us all?

Comment by Michelle on 09/29/04
Another stunner!  Almost thought it was my life story, then wished it was.  Completely engrossed. Loved it!

Comment by leah on 09/29/04
I'm sure at least 99% of your readers were totally engrossed as matters refused to conform to plan.

I feel like it is asking a lot, but could there be a sequel (or more)? Life inevitably moves on past G to R ratings and eventually to X, but this story wasn't even close. I doubt that any sequel would stay at G-level, but it was a real pleasure for the introduction to Jan, Tommy and their mother. And by the way, I'm not sure how many GGs out there are as nice as Jan.

Comment by Toni on 09/29/04
I really enjoyed your story. It would be nice to hear more of Amanda's adventures. I don't see why it is rated X, there is no sex or suggestive activities. I would rate it G or at the most M.

Comment by JEnna on 09/28/04
A very  interresting story. I liked it alot. Thanks

Comment by slimv on 09/28/04
Jennifer, I'm in awe of what you did with this story!  It's amazing.  I felt like I was Tommy while I was reading it.  I wish I was him.  I wish I was Amanda!
Thank you!

Comment by Jane Hudson on 09/27/04
Love it

Comment by Early June on 09/27/04
This is one of your cuter tales.  If only more mothers could be as perceptive and supportive as you wrote of Amanda's. This story is a quick, pleasant, and enjoyable read.  Your writing skills seem to be smoothing this story moved very well.  I liked the final realization.  Thank you for sharing this delightful little essay with us.



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