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The Discovery
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Comment by Mariah on 04/14/13
What a nice story, to know there are people of excess wealth that will commit it to good and much needed use. Comment by ALISON MARY on 08/26/09 I have to agree with the previous comment about editing and proof reading.However,you are a prolific writer with obvious talent, Comment by Trying to understand on 07/12/09 A sweet story for sure. I have read it at least three times over the last several months. I only wish that the author had used a proof reader. The story kept moving from 1st person to 3d person in the same sentence which resulted in my having to read the sentence over a couple of times to keep the continuity going. Also, there were several "redundent" phrases. It seemed that the author wasn't sure which word to used so they used both instead of the correct one. I mention this in a "positive" critism to improve the story not to "rebuke" or give "negative" critism. Overall, the story was enjoyable. Please in all future stories, before posting, have a friend or someone to proof it first. After all, all the experts, professional writers do. Your writing ability is certainly there, just needs some assistance in the proofing. Thank you for allowing me to give my advice. Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/05/07 What a rags-to-riches story. Nathan becomes Kathy and becomes the woman of her dreams. Too bad his dad was such a bully and was glad to be rid of his son. Janet, may all your drams come true. Comment by Rone welles on 06/29/07 What a nice story .. a dream come true ... we can only wish that life could be like this ... Five stars nice end ... |
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