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The Doctor Is In
by SenyorDave

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Comment by henrietta49 on 03/09/10
I thought that this was a very good story. It was very true to its source material, "Regiment of Women". As the first commentator on the story said, this could easily be developed into a TG soap opera.

Comment by Minty on 06/21/07
An interesting idea this - it certainly has a lot of potential. I had a look in the story queue before I wrote this and it seems you aren't writing any more, which is a shame, because you clearly can write well and have plenty of imagination.
The story itself was only an introduction really. The thing could run and run I reckon. In fact it reminded me of a tacky soap opera in a way, which is a good thing in this context.
Anyway, hope you'll write some more sometime. Hugs

Minty




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