I don't get it  have these responders never seen a Disney flick  where men and boy turn into dogs...of course they keep their human minds and the film Lady Hawk where the curse of the lovers were to be trapped in the form of a bird and wolf?  And from whence come the fairy tales of Wolfman and werewolves?  Now of the beastiality  scene  a lot of us have had sex with animals   either cuddling them like we do our cats or in my case  allowing my secretary to have me kneel and lean over a small coffee table  with my arms outstretched  and tied and my legs seperated and tied to the table. I was blind folded and naked  She rubbbed what I though was some sort of lubricant on my male pussy ( as she called it) and then I felt the presents of a dog beind me.  The lubricant turned out to be female dog scent.   The two other people in the room were talking to it and then I felt his legs on my ribs and within in a few very strange seconds I was being fucked!  He licked my hole and was panting heavily and he continued to pump me and force his whole thing into me  He came and I was thrilled thinking I had become a real bitch.  After I was released and my blind fold taken off  I saw a beautiful German shepard sitting there.  I petted him and leaned over to let him kiss my face.  The next day I told my secretary I wanted to give my lover dog oral and that weekend she had her friend and his dog at her place. I had been fucked by a dog   and now I was leaning up against a post in the basement of her house and the dog  had his paws on my shoulders   My secretary was jacking him off and  the bright pink tool emerged I scunched down and took it in my mouth    He came after a few deep plunges and I did not swallow  ....I do not want to be a dog and I love being a human cocksucker cd etc etc   but I do understand how some people would love to be the animals they call their pets....You have a great imagination and most writers who do this for a living have a paid editorial staff to help them    so who really cares about your writing style as long as the thought get through   Remind me sometime to tell you what my mother did to me?

You are a cunt for writing this.

Um.......like......what the F???  This was one sick and disgusting story.  All Patrick wanted was to be a girl.  And hos 'loving' Mom had him turned into a dog???  Sorry, I just don't get it.  

What the hell was that i feel sick now... Why would... no thats just wrong... you should be appaled at yourself... I mean that was wrong.

   It wasn't really that bad. I mean I know their was some grammer errors but it's fiction,fantasy. Fantasy isn't suppose to be realistic. Although their is a point with the mother turning her child into a dog.

This was the most disgusting story that I have ever read! In more ways than just the fact that no one in their right mind would turn their child into a dog!

The spelling and grammar errors make this a very hard read.
Don’t you know what a word processor is for? If you do please start to use it. If you don’t have one please go get one.

I will never read another one of your stories after reading this

Personally I like all kinds of furry stories, but with one exception. Brainwashing! It spoils the exploration of human to animal psyche. The loss of speech, dependance on "masters", freedom from responsibilites and final acceptance of new "furry" life.

Paula, there is probably some sort of genuine story opportunity in the idea, but not handled like this!  Gods alive, it saddens me to think that anyone could find this little vignette in any way appealing and, to top it off, it's so poorly written.  Don't you EVER proof read your stuff?  Odd mistakes, yes, but what are stir-ups?

Where I come from, that's more likely to be something you buy from a Chinese restaurant.  C'mon, Paula, quantity will never replace quality and, as someone's already said here, there may be some sick people out there, but no mother would ever do this to her child.

Think again, honey and try reading what you've written before you post it.  Or get someone to vet your copy for you (sick pun, but no sicker than this story, I fear).

Oh, Paula.  

This is awful.  Aside from the Personality Death aspects, there's the fact that it's his own mother that has him killed... implausibly surgically turned into a dog... and the fur is GLUED on?  Not only does nobody tumble to it, but he wins awards? Oh, Paula.

Paul this is a joke its as sick a story as i've ever read ,i expected more from you. not only does it killed off a person but its totally unbelievable. you cant turn someone into a dog that would eventually win a ribbon. would any mother do that to her child . think about it. well for your information you have just lost a reader.