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The Domineering Mother-in-Law
by Gloria Marshall

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Comment by RoyalCBD.com on 06/30/21

foJGVv There as a lot of folks that I think would

Comment by smashing top seo on 10/25/13

uTtsSq Major thanks for the article.Much thanks again. Great.

Comment by ashley on 09/04/13

love this one.

Comment by Jhard100 on 11/16/12

Great story

Comment by ashley on 09/22/10

great one this

Comment by boc on 12/01/08

great story,fun,exciting,erotic.

Comment by Bobbie on 09/23/06

Wonderful story. Was thinking I and others should be half so lucky.
Either a mother in law or a wife of that calliber but to have both
just seems to be a double helping and some never or have to really work to just get a taste.
It hardly seems fair for one to have both, working in concert.

Comment by Sassy Sue on 08/14/06

I agree with Jenny: short and hot! Thanks for writing and posting it.
SS

Comment by jenny on 08/12/06

i LOVED it! It was short, but HOT! In fact, i had to go put on my pink Bo-Peep dress and petticoat after the first paragraph!
Not a lot of boring detailed comments on the makeup, etc. Just enough to get the point across. AND, it turned out well for A/all!

Comment by julie j on 07/01/04

short story intresting i would have liked more of a build up not straight into a dream sound like a set up

Comment by C Whyte on 05/19/03

Always a fan of costumes, especially period ones.

Comment by julie on 04/21/03

an interesting short story but to fast for my liking needs more explanaion and shock

Comment by maxieisasissy on 04/12/03

I loved the story. I hope there are more! It might be fun to have a 'forced' threesome with Debi and Jake (or Linda).

Comment by Justine on 04/11/03

Very well done. I got turned on just reading it. I always prefer the "forbidden fruit" approach to the usual drugs/blackmail/violence- much more erotic.

Comment by Stefani V. on 04/11/03

I enjoyed this story a lot. I'm sorry you ended it so soon, you could have put him through so many more humiliating experiences. Here he is relishing the fact that his mother-in-law is going to provide him some HOT sex and he will earn it through some form of being embarrassed or humiliated. Then what happens??? The ante is upped by intruders. However, you sense it is more than just a story of a sissy all dressed up, with no where to hide. Great job.

xoxoxo
Stefani V.

Comment by Dawna on 04/11/03

Enjoyed it. I found the story quite erotic as Sophie preys on her son-in-laws weakness for lovely feminine gowns. I appreciated that the femdom was "gentle" relying on the husband's sexual arousal when dressed in gorgeous feminine outfits. Looking forward to your next story.

Comment by Georgina on 04/11/03

Dear Gloria.

Nice one, very exciting. more please.

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