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Donna Anne's Halloween
by Lisa Elizabeth

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Comment by Zoe Wood on 08/28/20
As a life long CD these story's are wonderful. I know how the boys felt after experiencing girls clothes. I love the description of the salon and doing  her makeup.
I love the thought of boys wanting to be girls, as l did  and still do. Please can we have some more adventures of Donna, please.

Comment by karen harden on 08/17/13
i love the story of donna anne  she will be a beautiful bride someday

Comment by Diego on 10/23/12
alot of the answers are talikng about square scarfs. you dont have a picture of exactly what you mean, but when i hear  V  in the front, in terms of how girls are wearing them today, i think of another style (not using a square scarf). you just need the scarf to be long what you do is fold it in half, length wise, then put it around your neck. you should have one side of it having the two original ends and the other having a loop. you take the two-ends side and pull it through the loop on the other side. if you do it right, then you'll get a  v . hope this is what you meant!

Comment by Idana on 12/13/11
I actlauly found this more entertaining than James Joyce.

Comment by Bobbi on 09/19/11
That saves me. Thanks for being so snesbile!

Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 08/04/09
I loved it, just like the first place bride.
You're a great writer. Thank you for all your stories.
Hugs and kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by john on 09/10/08
have just read your stories. But I have to say that some of them are a bit to much. In as much a 9 year old needs to wear a bra. Please get real I in my 50 years of life have never known a 9 year old to need a to wear a bra. Yes Donald aka Donnie might have had to wear one for the bridesmaids dress. But after I don't think so. Sorry I have meet one girl that had to wear a bra but she had a condition that she reach purberty at an early age. other than that i have never seen a nine year old have to wear a bra. Other than what I have said your stories are delightful and really entertaining. I hope you write some more. But please don't make your hero/heroine at such an early age wear a bra.

Comment by rone on 07/15/05
  Loved the story  Donna & janet need to go on and become girls full time...nice clean fun  well done and apprecated ....
some of your readers have health problems and cannot walk or get out of bed on thier own ....We read all kinds of stories and yours are fun and in good taste ...thank you  thank you  thank  you  Rone

Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/21/02
Firsr Place Bride and Donna Anne's Halloween, was very good for the Halloween story. Now it is time to continue the story. Donna Anne and Janet Lynn both tell their parents that they wish to stay as girls and when they meet with opposition from their fathers, they retaliate by going to school as girls, and then when their fathers realize they are fighting a losing battle accept them for what they are. Their daughters.

Just a suggestion.

Barb

Comment by Diane Sutton on 02/18/02
This was done very well with nice little descriptions throughout the story to give a realalistic feel to it. I'm sure that something like this could happen if the right circumstances were in place and just think it's too bad that it had to end in such a short time span.

Diane

Comment by Dana Dixon on 05/24/01
I love your story about Donna Anne and Janet becoming little girls.  I am a CD myself and am a single father of a 10 yr old daughter, but she is such a tomboy and refuses to wear "girlie" clothes.  I hope that changes soon and she will want to start wearing feminine clothes ocassionally.  I have enough experience with makeup that I could easily help her.  She might wonder why I know so much about clothes and makeup!  The thought of those little "girls" wearing the bridal ensemble is so precious.  Your story was a pleasure to read, well written and with lots of detail.  I wonder of such a scenario ever actually takes place in real life, but I'm hoping it does.  If more little boys could experience the wonders of girls clothing I'm sure more would embrace the girl lifestyle.



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