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Don't Bet Your Underwear
by Samantha Michelle

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Comment by Angie on 06/17/14
Thanks for writing this story that so well captured the teenage angst.  It was engaging and entertaining.

Comment by Stephen on 06/25/12
Another story of yours I loved , what lovely worlds you create . I hope you write lots more

Comment by Silvia. on 04/23/12
Good story.

Comment by Christy on 03/04/12
Wow just an emotional wonderfull story I loved it and it has great message
Will there be any more about them

Comment by Annonymous on 06/04/11
Make a part 2

Comment by julie j on 08/13/05
A BRILLIANT DRAMATIC STORY BUTONE OF HELP&UNDERSTANDING FOR ALL WHAT A GREAT STORY ALL THE TRIALS&TRIBULATIONS I MUST SAY YOUR WRITING IS GREAT WELL WRITTEN A MOST ENJOYABLE STORY OF CHANGE BRILLIANT WELL DONE

Comment by poe on 07/31/05
Hi
  Just finished reading this delightful story and i can honestly say i really enjoyed it.Thanks a lot for a really great and enjoyable tale.

                    Poe


Comment by Sirearle on 02/01/05
G'Day Samantha,

Thank you for your delightful story.   Clearly you enjoyed writing this rather hypnotic tale.   Your self evident joy shines through making your storytelling very special.  Did you ever consider rewriting this in a much longer format ?   The basic storyline is so wonderful that it seems a terrible shame not to allow it to fully develop itself.  HUGS                    1/2/05

                                       Earle

Comment by julie j on 11/07/04
this is an intresting concept of what could happen this is a long &well explained story well written and described well done

Comment by chrisl on 05/24/03
Hi Samantha Michelle,
                    Fun to see SamJay reread this recently as she is another favourite author :) I have a very similar comment in that I regularly reread great stories. Some nights when life is a bit sad this tale and "Teddy Bear" help me regain happiness.
Thanks and hugs,
Chrisl

Comment by Samantha Jay on 05/12/03
One of my favourites, I just keep rereading it.

Thank you for writing it.

Sam

Comment by sissy paula on 07/28/01
Very well written story.
Loved it very much.
The ending brought tears of joy as to the outcome of the entire group.
Thanks for taking the time to write a wonderful story.
sissy paula



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