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Dormitory Fire Drill
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Comment by David Martin on 07/06/23
Love it. I want more please. Comment by SassySue on 08/05/16 While I agree with the other reviewers, I think that I loved this story even more than they did. Not only was it well written with great insight into the characters feelings and emotions, but it was one of the most erotic stories I have ever read. The sex scenes were wonderful, with just the right amount of detail and length. It caused a 5 alarm fire in me! Comment by Davina on 02/17/13 Superb story, beautifully written and, unlike a lot of our stories, not a spelling mistake or a wrong word used. Very funny and really erotic. Thanks Lia, I enjoyed it immensely and will now read your others. xxx Davina Comment by Sun1 on 11/17/07 Excellent story Comment by Alyssa on 07/28/05 Yeah, I agree with Tiara. I am so happy to see a sweet, sexual tale of crossdressing that involves a GG. Not all crossdressing sex has to be gay sex. I hope you continue this story with her friend playing a part, or at least write more like it. Comment by Pauline on 07/23/05 I loved the way that the story built naturally and did not force anything upon Lisa until the sweet submission that was ever so joyful and even sharing -- a place all us femmes would like to be. Comment by Early June on 07/21/05 Nicely done. I like the way she took him lovingly in a direction he had no itention of. You write clearly and the characters are full of life. I liked the teasing from her friend. The poor boy might learn a lesson about being in places he should not be, but I doubt it. Comment by TiaraCD on 07/21/05 Hello |
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