What a delightful tale. Reciprocal love is not often found in literature and is difficult to describe in TG tales in particular.  You have mastered the chore with grace.
This story is a gem and I am surprised I had not heard of it before now.  The characters are credible, the plot is interesting and the style of writing in enrapturing.
 I will have to find more of your efforts.  If I enjoy them at least half as much as this one, they will still be delightful.  Thank you for sharing this story with us.

I'm so pleased to be the first to comment on your story.

You did such a nice job telling this twisting and turning tale.

Not to spoil, but I found the ending to be a bit over the top.

You might try showing more and telling less. All of the internal dialogue is quite interesting -- given all that is happening so quickly. However, instead of telling how wonderful he feels, show us.

As a rule of thimb it is always good to engage the senses. You do a wonderful job of this by telling us how the breeze only goes so far up her skirt.

More of this is needed. Taste, smell, more descriptive touch.

All in all, quite delightful.

Angela Rasch