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Downsized, Upsized
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Don Cassandra on 08/20/12
Loved it!!!!  It was a refreshing change from the usual forced fem stories.  No additional coercion and no gay themes (not that there's anything wrong with the gays)

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Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 02/03/04
Of course it came as a complete surprise to Cindi and Dorothy when Chris came to work the next day in a man's suit.  He was accompanied by his lawyer, who served Cindi, Dorothy, and the cognizant officers of J. Bingham Department Stores with subpoenas alleging violations of Title VII of the Civil Rights Act of 1964.  The suit alleged that J. Bingham et al had created a hostile work environment by insisting that Chris wear women's underwear, clothing, and cosmetics in order to keep his job.  Also, the written policy of the store was deemed to be sexual discrimination.
Surprisingly the Jury found for Bingham et al.  Chris could not prove damages.  In fact, his financial situation actually improved with his affectation of female clothing and accessories.  The jury also determined that female sex was a bona fide occupational requirement for a salesperson in the lingerie department.
Chris was left with some very hefty legal bills and a fabulous wardrobe.
Can you tell I really enjoyed this story, Jennifer? :-)

Comment by GFriday on 02/02/04
Amen to Jaclyn's comments.  But that's the beauty of Jennifer's stories.  They don't follow form.  They're unpredictable, and there so elegantly laid out and detailed that she should be one of several gold standards on this site for newer writers.  Only a few do workplace femdom well: Denise Em, the long-gone Jennifer Richardson and Michelle X among them.  Jen White does more than just that, and as such, she's a treasure.

Comment by Sheryl S. on 02/02/04
Very very nice.  Lots of fun and it's a tale of overcoming adversity in lieu of perpetual victimization.  technique is always a strength of yours, Jennifer, and it is particularly strong here.  You combine strong visual discriptions with mutli-faceted characters and intriguing situations.  Well done, indeed!

Love & Huggs,
Sheryl S.

Comment by Jaclyn on 02/02/04
Monday  02/02/04
Just Read Your Story.  And I Enjoyed IT.
"THANK YOU", For Not Turning It Into The
"Usual"  Guy In Fem Clothes Goes Gay &
Dates His "Male" Customers.
You've Written A Very Good Story Without
Any Of The Male - Male Sex.

Comment by Axanar on 01/31/04
TERRIFIC! WONDERFUL! My faith in your ability to write great fiction and first-rate workplace fiction has always been unswerving.  And when I read something this wonderful, I know why that has been so.  The other ladies here said it and all I can say is I agreed with every word!  Looking forward to the next masterpiece.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/31/04
Now this is my kind of story!  I love a happy ending, I love to see justice done, I love to see a man proudly accepting the great gift of femininity, and I love to see an author take the road less traveled; BRAVO, Jennifer!!!

Comment by Cassndra on 01/31/04
Jennifer dear,

This is truly a delightful tale told as only you can tell it. You have wonderfully tied together a contemporary theme of job downsizing with a TG overlay. The result is outstanding. Thank you for a truly delightful read.

Hugs,

Cassandra

Comment by Pervette on 01/31/04
This is a very cute version of the gradual-feminization plot
combined with the department-store setting and the job-scarcity
situation. Really nicely worked out. The absence of the heavy
coercion that so often crops up in stories of this kind was a
refreshing change. I enjoyed it a lot. AND...if they have another
vacancy there, please, LET ME KNOW!!  :-)
.
--Pervy



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