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Do You Believe in Magic?
by Zephyrus

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Comment by suba me on 12/20/18
rX6VQc Very interesting information! Perfect what exactly I wanted!

Comment by Jerry on 04/25/11
Very well written I would enjoy a nether installment. I kinda expected to have the magician to say his name was Merland.

Comment by mike on 02/09/09
wonderful.charming.softly mastering the heckler.

Comment by julian on 12/27/08
this is a awsome story. i wish it could happen to me soon.

Comment by Lisa on 11/25/07
This is very good piece of writing

Comment by Rhonda on 09/12/07
This is a fabulous transformation story -- forced change with the encouragement of an enthusiastic audience.  Helplessness through magical restraints of mind and body, yet until the end poor Chrissy was aware of her ever tightening predicament.  The story is very well crafted with the author displaying an excellent command of language -- the visuals created by the detailed descriptions of every change and feeling experienced by Chris/Chrissy makes this lush with sensations and sensual images.

Well done!




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