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Druid's Ring: Criminal Justice
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Comment by Ronnie on 03/04/12
I love your Druid Rings series. I went back to reread them but could not find; Druid Rings: Healers Touch or Druid Rings: Mended Hearts. Comment by Eric on 02/19/05 Hopefully I'm just missing something, but it doesn't seem to me that Hobb's actions here are consistent with what the druids did in the first two stories, both from the standpoint of being willing to let Frank leave if he chooses to and of rejecting Scouser for moral reasons. And they let Scouser off way too easily; the implication seems to be that they consider becoming a girl in our world greater punishment than being a rat or an insect in theirs. (And the druids would have to intervene pretty strongly in the court proceedings to convince anyone that a 14-year old girl committed those crimes with no help.) Comment by Night Wolf on 07/04/03 This was a very good story but there are a few things you left out in my opinion you could have inculded what had happen to the mary that had become a baby and you also could have explain what happen to the third person who had become Mary and also the new black Cat was left out other then those I really enjoyed this bit of series! |
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