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The Dream Child
by Patricia Anne Anderson

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Comment by Kandis on 07/28/10
This truly was a Lovely story, however the ending was a bit abrupt for me. I would have liked to see a bit more details about Pamela's procedures, as well as maybe "finishing" the bully portion of the story, Tom had sworn revenge, yet there was no revenge, or thwarted attempts at revenge in the rest of the story. Other than the occasional typo's and grammar errors, very well written. ;)

Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 02/04/10
Hi Patricia!
You wrote a good story, well done.
Silvia.


Comment by Aleesha on 07/28/09
I liked your story but it was a pity you couldn't have finished it. Thanks.

Comment by antonia on 03/07/07
A very nice, sweet story with careless use of the wrong words and poor spelling in places.  A lot better than some of the rubbish and filth on this site.



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