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Dream Come True?
by Jennifer White

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Comment by julie j on 01/02/05
the story is very hard hitting well explained well written and enjoyable

Comment by Diane on 01/30/04
As usual you have hit home, I find this story so stimulating and would love to be in Heathers shoes, and trained to be a woman.  I would also love the humiliation she has gone through, I need it it. Diane of MN

Comment by Mysti on 12/22/03
     Finally- a new and improved take on the workplace forced fem genre. Instead of the out-of-nowhere sexual assault (a surefire way to get- and lose- a sexual harassment suit), we have an employee caught doing something which is certain to get him fired, unless... And, given the current workforce jobless rate, that's a pretty strong incentive to get into the bra, panties, and makeup your boss has waiting for you. I especialy liked the part where his slow-but-sure feminization was explained to the other employees by stating that he was a closet TV who was coming out, and his boss was kind-hearted enough to "allow"  him do it. Talk about twisting the knife- I loved it! A minor quibble- wearing a black bra under a white shirt is still a major fashion faux pas, even in forced fem land- I think that making him wear a size 38 D bra, with appropriately sized breast forms, under a very tight top,would have achieved the desired humiliating result just as well. Looking forward to more along the same lines.
     

Comment by Joann on 12/22/03
Jennifer
Great story, I felt as if I wanted to take Heathers place. It would be a dream come true.



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