I loved this story tremendously, the part where Jennifer was offered a lesbian encounter goes to show how truly female she was early on, I am happy that she did well.  Your stories must be read by millions of people by now!!!

Gillian is completely WRONG Janet, I am a hetro-sexual male. I enjoy all of your stories, even when I find them lacking. I have always been truthful in my comments. In this story, Jenny finally gets the loving acceptance of her very macho dadddy. The journey is filled with wit and humor. Janet, the lesbian scene was a bit much.But Jenny proved to be true to her hetro self, I can see a future story here where Bill and Jenny find each other. Janet, let your light shine

 The complete story... If not the best then very close to perfict.
we could all only wish or dream .....this is what dreams are made of .....  Thank you >>>>  Thank you >>>>>  Thank you

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Oh there's another comment on this page from someone who has a thing against Janet but to tell you the truth I think Janet and her talents are tremdous and a joy to behold and I've always enjoyed her stories.

For those who may not know and for those who may frequent this reader comment page as of this month August of 2002 since the beginning of the year Janet has had over 934,000+ hits on her stories.

So, with that knowledge it should be known that she is a well respected writer and author and seems to please most of her readers.

This story only allows a small inner self of her to become a force to be shown to her adoring public. I'm glad she has written another wonderful story and will always look forward to her works.

Let those who don't know better look elsewhere as there is nothing but love and understanding in all of Janet's stories and that is not something that can be thought of as bad.

Diane

The comments made by Gillian are so unfair I'm almost sorry I used the name Gill for my first heroine (Friends Four Life).

Your story studies some of the basic problems of our lives.  How can you possibly communicate your wants and needs to those that you love the most.  Telling them would be very high stakes poker, when losing their love is more than you could stand.

Your young man seemed to lack a competitive nature as a boy, but quickly assumed it as a girl, wanting to be as feminine and pretty as possible.  

To state that only queens would love your story, is as absurd as demanding that there only be two sexes.

Your story had all the elements needed; strong, well-developed characters, conflict, resolution and a believable plot.

I have only a small suggestion... I like to know what perfume, what color of lipstick, how she was able to have a waxing without detection, etc.  Live is in the details.  When you buy your next lipstick... look at the thousands of choices available to you.  

Much love to you...

another wonderful story and wish that all mothers could sit down and talk calmly to disgust things  instead of telling the TS/TV they'd make an ugly girl or never change their body under their roof. Love reading your sweet tales.

Boy, more well written stories with the usual gay overtones.  Is that all you can write?  Well, I'm sure all the queens love it.  I don't.

Janet, I am half done with the story, but you've worked your usual magic, making the emotions flow with the words.  Getting simple words to put fear, terror, satisfaction and hope in one sentence, don't know how you can do it.  But am thankful for your writing. thank you, Joanna K.