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The Dream
by Prudence Walker

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Comment by Elizabeth Cathryn Mystery on 10/27/23
It is very important not to have ones stuffed animals, dolls or even favourite pictures left behind if you move home. I am so glad they were not forgotten. After all who will you talk to if they are not there and who will listen to you if they are not with you. They listen and understand all out heartaches, don't they.

Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
osaKoE The play will be reviewed, to adrian peterson youth

Comment by suba analuba on 08/12/18
OsA2Oy Very interesting ツinformation!Perfect just what I was looking ツfor! テ青ーテ青静青「テつ津青ーテ青づ青ーテつ紀 have great faith in fools テ青ーテ青静青ーテつ津青ーテ青静青「テつづ青アテつづ青「テつテ青「テつ self confidence my friends call it.テ青ーテ青静青「テつ津青ーテ青づ青ーテつ by Edgar Allan Poe.

Comment by Ravi on 03/26/14
Sweet and loving story!
Kisses.

Comment by smashing top seo on 10/24/13
iHxGla Thank you ever so for you post. Fantastic.

Comment by Silvia. on 02/11/12
Sweet and loving story!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Jerry on 04/28/11
A very cute story good description

Comment by k mixon on 05/20/08
This was always a real fantasy of mine. Little girls have a way of
atracting love in a special way. It would be nice to start over and
by the time you reached adulthood,your education,talents,and money
would be waiting in your new adult life.

Comment by Molly on 03/14/08
Colbert, finance minister to Louis XIV, the infamous "Sun King" of France, is reputed to have said "the art of taxation consists in so plucking the goose [ie. the people] as to procure the largest quantity of feathers with the least possible amount of squawking." Parking enforcement, especially enforcing parking meters, is all about "plucking geese" and nothing about public safety or civil order. The smug, self-satisfied "officers" that tool around in their Cushmans and tell you "you gots ta feed the meter!" (while writing out your citation) when you get involved in your shopping and don't make it back to your car quite in time are the real "cops"-- parasitic lice, sucking blood from ordinary people, providing no benefit in return to anyone but themselves and their employers.

How extraordinary that Prue casts her main character into the life of one of these bottom feeders, as symbolic of all that trans people must suffer-- working a job that she hates where she must do what is against her nature (ie. injure people), because it is one of the few work situations where she is allowed to express her true gender. Fortunately, though, there is poetic justice (at least in stories, anyway), and Maggie does not miss the opportunities presented to her to practice her compassionate nature, despite the demands of her job.

There is more magic in this story than the magic described in the story. I would be blessed indeed if I could know that anything I've written on the Internet has inspired anyone the way that Maggie has obviously inspired Prue.


Comment by Maggie the Kitten on 01/26/04
Dear Auntie Prue

Just want to take this opportunity to thank you for so many things.  You have shared your writing talent with the world, bringing joy to so many and even one Kitten.  When that Kitten wandered into the chatroom with her first crayon drawing and showed it to you, you took the time to read it, send it to YOUR proofreader, tell her she did very good and encouraged her to color more.  You became a friend, a mentor and most magical of all, an auntie.  You gave her a lap to cuddle on and a moose to munch her hair.  You took one of your stories and gave her soul a place within it (Maggie in HeadCase).  You took her four-legged feline self and made her a goo kitty (Polymer Man).  Finally you took her greastest hearts desire and made it come true in this story.  Thank you Auntie Prue for all that you have given us happy readers and especially this one little girl.  I loves you with all my heart, your niece Maggie da Kitten



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