Crystal's Story Site
· Return to Story Index Page · Add your Comments ·

Story Comments by Readers

Dreaming
by Mikki

Latest comments are shown at top of page.


Comment by Miss Fitt on 08/28/18
     There are many stories similar to this one using the same theme, the same bad grammar and the same bad spelling. Get an editor.

Comment by Rita on 04/04/07
Basic story is fine, spelling and grammar needs work, story needs rounding up, without knowing your age but guess you are young, if so keep at it!

Comment by (AJ) Eric on 04/01/07
Needs a proofreader; typos and wrong words abound.  And it ends rather abruptly -- seems to me that there ought to be a reason given as to why it never happened again, since both Mikki and her aunt seemed enthusiastic about the whole situation.

But it's a nice journey down a familiar path.  Thanks for posting.

Eric




Add your Comments

      The importance of reader feedback cannot be overstated.   Authors rely on it to improve their future works, and it gives them the incentive to write more stories if they know that their hard work has been appreciated.  I am not saying that comments must all be lauditory.  Authors often appreciate honest, constructive criticism over simple remarks like 'Great story', although simple praise is appreciated also.  There is no limit on how much you can enter in the 'comments' box.   Sentences will automatically word wrap at the end of the line so please do not use your carriage return/enter key except at the end of your paragraphs.

      It is not necessary to use your real name here, and, email addresses are optional.  Posting your email address will allow the author to thank you for taking the time to post your comments, and/or discuss critiques and address possible concerns. 

      Be forewarned that abusive remarks and language will be removed, and the posters may be banned from this AND other areas of StorySite.



Name :
E-Mail : (Optional & Confidential)
Comments :
 
  

Please report any problems to Crystal