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The Dreams That You Dare To Dream
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Diane on 02/19/08
How delightfully loving and sensative! And very different.
You do nice work!

Comment by Lost on 12/22/07
I loved your story, Thank you for wrighting it.

Comment by Leah on 09/18/07
Kept waiting for the hard part, and the story was over, and that part never arrived -- just the enjoyable glow of a lovely tale well told.

And that pondering of the mystery of whose wish it was that was behind this whole thing was a special delight.


Comment by Linda Marie Daniels on 09/18/07
What a sweet wonderful story. Even more, it was still exciting and sexy.  I've been a big fan of Jennifer's for a while and believe this is one of her best efforts.

Although the fantasy involved in this story was my favorite part, I enjoyed the way Jennifer wove in a few realistic drawbacks to Laurie's transformation.  I also liked her keeping Laurie attracted to women and the sweet loving way Laurie transformed Brandi.


Comment by Paula on 09/15/07
Just a wonderful story to read.  A true sweet tale.



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