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A Dream Waiting To Cum True
by SexyAlyssa

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Comment by Silvia. on 06/19/12
Very bad.

Comment by Sophia Cassaid on 03/01/10
I would love to make ur dream true for u and myself problem is i live in ohio and its 2010 now

Comment by Rena on 01/07/04
Even with me just being the next state over I'm sure there be a lot that would have to be arrange before everything took place!  But it sounds like a very lovely dream except for the you being High part!  Other then that Who knows I hope it comes true for you!

Comment by Sheryl S. on 01/06/04
A quite enjoyable read, and a nice vignette.  The only parts that truly betrayed it as fantasy were: 1) just by "CA", there is no way that either IM'er would know they were close enough to meet in the nation's third largest state, and 2) they had arranged to meet in the bar, so the meeting in the parking lot, too dangerous for a first meet anyway, was a non sequitur.  But, these are minor nitpicks only relevant if you decide to flesh this out more.  Stands on its own quite nicely as is.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

Love & Huggles,
Sheryl S.



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